by Southern Comfort
Wednesday, July 15, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Celebrating the joy of loving and being loved.
Fervent desire, burning bright,
As two glowing bodies heat up the night.
Demanding lips, steal breath away,
Paradise's fulfillment, found where two bodies lay.
Passionate caresses, given by fingers of flame,
Arousal, the beast that cannot be tamed.
Hushed whispers, as lovers engage,
Delightful, as raw lust screams with rage.
Hearts race with a cadence, a frantic beat,
The urgency, of two bodies, as they mingle and meet.
Greedy mouths and tongues, assault sensitive places,
Hidden treasures found, as joy reflects upon faces.
Lapping, sucking, drunk with frenzied pleasure,
Erupting passion, too deep to measure.
An explosive entry, into Love's Cave,
Need now entombed, but writhes restlessly in the grave.
Expressed moans, as sweet death comes and goes,
Sending soothing warmth, from head to toe.
Utter silence, as mingled nectar flows.
Passion utters a sigh and then lets go.
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|Reviewed by William Bonilla
Love & peace
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|This is beautiful...getting all the men going with this one sugar...love it & YOU! Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Come to my parlor said the hungry snake to Bambi...as she licked her chops!
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Geez and I thought it was getting hot here, whew.......
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Oooh Weeee! Ms. Comfort, you are heating up the den with this one hot and passionate poem. Oh my, I am going to have to go take a cold shower, seeing how there is no man here to soothe this wild beast..lol
You are something else for sure, I love this passion!
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THE IMAGERY IN THIS WRITE IS DONE VERY WELL PRODUCED BY THE PHRASES AND RHYME THAT SUPPORT YOUR THEME STRONGLY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND
BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Whew! Thanks for sharing, SC. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Thanks, Ms Comfort, you got the old ticker ticking. -gene.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
I have the fire extinguisher at hand again. Beautifully written lovemaking and passion. Hot!