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Veil Dance
by Southern Comfort

Wednesday, July 22, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Lust hides behind The Veil Dance

Come, My Lover, find joy in me,
My body is a stormy and churning sea.
I will absorb yor body, kindle your desire,
Feel the heat, see the fire.
As warmth surrounds, your sighs fill the air,
Hidden from sight, cloaked by my long, dark hair.
Soft hands and full, pink lips,
Stroke and ignite your passive body, with flaming fingertips.
My lips become the portal, to Paradise,
You become a voyager, without thinking twice.
As I inhale your breath, you are breathless, lost in space,
Your heart races, with a maddening pace.
Lust and physical attraction,
Causes an explosive reaction.
Arousal, flowing through your veins,
Fever, rises, causing desire to reign.
Smoldering, delirious, a willing Love Slave,
Your body pleads and I give you what it craves.

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Reviewed by Dark Knight 10/6/2010
very erotic
Reviewed by William Bonilla 7/26/2009
Your sensuous words left me speechless
What can I say now
But that I am drowning in words
I am unable to scribe.......
Outstanding write S.C

Love & Peace be with you
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 7/26/2009
powerful write filled with passion and desire. You've captured it well and the music adds a wonderful feeling and helps intensify this beautiful offering. Well done dear friend!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) 7/24/2009
You know you're one of my favorite writer's here at the den sugar, love ya! Holly
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 7/24/2009
Seductively beautiful SC.
Reviewed by Lori Moore 7/23/2009
Sensuous poetry. This is very nice.
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 7/23/2009
Let me round up my camel and I'll be over. I wanna see this dance, sho nuff.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/23/2009
WOW! You haven't lost your edge, SC; excellent! Good to be reading you again! Welcome home!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Li'l Twister. :D
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/23/2009
Wow SC you were certainly missed and with writes such as this, I can see why. Great write. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/23/2009
That veil dance of will be like peeling an onion and making the eyes watering...I hope of joy!


Reviewed by Gene Williamson 7/22/2009
Now you're talking, Sweet Comfort. My desire is kindled!
I do sigh a lot. Lead this voyager to paradise. -gene.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 7/22/2009
This is a superb invitation to ignite dullness and passivity. I'm packing my (mental) bags and I'm on my way. Gorgeous writing.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/22/2009
Thank you for sharing this passionate and sensual offering, SC. Love and best wishes,

Regis (PD)
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/22/2009
Well now I know why I have missed you so much SC with passionate and hot steamy writes like this you keep my blood warm and running freely. hugs

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