An interest in you and I
by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Friday, June 10, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Poem about a woman I met at a conference. She was very nice.
She cradles me
with love kisses,
especially on my
broken right hand.
She gives me an
early morning hug
She has a nice smell of
vanilla perfume and she
makes her presence known!
Now, Do I tell her?
Or, does she already know?
Is the attraction mutual?
She came up to ME!
I have been scared since
Yet, she has a fiancé
Which gender I think
I already know.
Written by Rebecca (Becca) P Lang (Henry) on
June 1, 2005 at 9am CST, DST. All rights
Updated on June 10th, 2005 by same name. 11:40am CST,DST.
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|An open and honest expressive write, Becca. Way to go! Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|wonderful write, quite different, but still...very good! brava, rebecca!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
This is really thought provoking and emotional. It really hits on alot of the things we encounter through life. I really like this poem. Very unique.xo
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
I am impressed. This is a fine piece.
This has such fire. A fire I have not read in your work before. This has the spark of love beginning to bloom and then the heart ache of discovering his heart belongs to another.
This is astounding. I hope I read more work like this from you in the future.
|Reviewed by Veronica Hosking
|Great sense of warmth and intrepidation. The link seems to be broken though.|