|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Good write, I too am a zodiac person and you too are aging very well amid the laughter and the memories. May you have many more years together and always love each other.|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Japanese format with a twist... This is mysterious, open to countless interpretations. I feel so much of the illusion/delusion game in this.
But also a soothing quality.
As for the portrait, in terms of ruin ;-) the old woman's face looks more refined and "complete" than the cold and shadowy face of the younger one.
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Ruin of conception, of who we realy are! different at every moment!
wonderful! Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|My sonnet: "Highways Of My Soul" was a similar effort to describe the "lines" earned by living a full life.
Good job, Keith.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
So much said in few words--succinct perfection! You (and your wife) have captured aging exactly! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.