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Cracked Cake
by Jennave Belleu Coz
Thursday, September 27, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Sad Baker

I made my love
A cake of heart

I filled it with
The best of my stuff

'Cept for the Rum
Strong and spicey

It puffed up
Really nicely

Except for the part where
It started to crack

That gave me a panic attack

Oh my thought I
While frosting it red

I should have made pie, instead.

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Reviewed by D Johnson 9/30/2007
I'd a eaten the cake or pie, that's just the way I am.

Reviewed by chris stienstra 9/30/2007
Keep your heart close to the cake. What frosting do you use on your heart Jen? This is a wonderful write. Only make pie when you are done eating the cake!
My very best regards,
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 9/28/2007
Naw, show your cracks. He'll still like you.

Reviewed by George Thompson 9/28/2007
Clever write. Keep the cake and cover the crack with icing. :>)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 9/27/2007
My mother always said if a cake cracks it's more moist! Don't know but your poem was clever Jen.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/27/2007
At least you can cook! I can, but I don't like to. I'd rather eat out, let someone else do the cookin' for me! LOL Well done, Jennave!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/27/2007
Aw, Jen,

All he'll care about is that you made it with your own two hands. :) 'Nuff said. :) Who cares if it's cracked: ain't we all? LOL Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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