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|Reviewed by D Johnson
|I'd a eaten the cake or pie, that's just the way I am.
|Reviewed by chris stienstra
|Keep your heart close to the cake. What frosting do you use on your heart Jen? This is a wonderful write. Only make pie when you are done eating the cake!
My very best regards,
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Naw, show your cracks. He'll still like you.
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|Clever write. Keep the cake and cover the crack with icing. :>)
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|My mother always said if a cake cracks it's more moist! Don't know but your poem was clever Jen.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|At least you can cook! I can, but I don't like to. I'd rather eat out, let someone else do the cookin' for me! LOL Well done, Jennave!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
All he'll care about is that you made it with your own two hands. :) 'Nuff said. :) Who cares if it's cracked: ain't we all? LOL Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.