by Stacy Mantle
Wednesday, October 19, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A poem I wrote years ago, but thought needed a refresher.
Last night, and thrice the week before –
I dreamt a dream I’ve dreamed before.
The ocean, vast and wondrous blue
I dreamt that I had sailed with you.
The whales called their mournful cries
As dolphins dived along the side
Of our ship – large, straight and true
The moon reflected over you…
"Come sail the world with me," you said.
"I’ll show you lands with cliffs of red,
the sea we’ll sail - so far away
Travelling, happy all our days.
"I’ll show you pyramids on high,
In Giza where the workers cried
Alexanders’ conquered worlds afar
The Sphinx that lies beneath the stars.
"We’ll see Colossus, tall and true .
The coliseum in Rome we’ll view –
We’ll climb the peaks of Kootenay
In Babylon, we’ll walk ‘mongst bouquets.
The mausoleum, the green Greek isles,
The Blackened Sea, we’ll sail awhile.
I’ll hold you in my arms so free
If only you will sail with me…"
He paused and waited for reply.
The moon reflecting in his eyes.
I watched, and thought of words to say,
And then they came, from far away…
"The pyramids on high, I’ve seen.
Fields of wheat, and yards of green.
The coliseum, the green Greek isles,
The blackened sea would not bring smiles.
"The sphinx, the deserts with kings of old.
They are spectacular, I’m told.
But, all those things are not for me.
I dream only of you and I sailing the sea..."
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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Fantasy it sound like and fantastic it is. THis poem caught my eye cause I am a lover of the ocean and am a water sign. I love traveling too. The history parts you relate too are magnificent also. Thanks for this awesome write.|
|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson
|Simply exquisite. Perfect form, easy flow, nicely formated text and rhyme. I enjoyed this poem from start to finish. Thank you for sharing this piece that actually spoke my life.|
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|I love poems about sailing AND dreams. I've written many. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I've enjoyed finding your page.|
|Reviewed by Casey Harmon
|I love the style of this poem. It takes the reader to far off places. I have a strong passion for adventure, and this was right down my alley. Very well done, Stacy!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this poetic journey, Stacy. Love and peace to you.
|Reviewed by Jill Christine Carpenter
|Stacy, I always enjoy your writing, but this one is special. I'm glad you posted it. It is lovely. Well done, friend, very well done.
Do more! :o)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I believe that I've read this before, Stacy - but it wa definitely worth reading again - wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|It don't need refreshing. Just diving to such a utopian dream.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|What a wonderful journey! I can envision all this in my mind. Wonderful write indeed!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|What a wonderful trip...enjoyed reading and the sound of the words spoken. Well done.|