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Rain
by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Wednesday, December 05, 2007
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Flowing raindrops create beautiful noise


Swirling mist quickly appear all around


Between drops hearing a joyous faint voice


As the tapping rain hits the welcoming ground


 


Pounding echoes with haunting chaos


During its honored life-long cloudy path


Whispering those sweet drizzly nothings


A memorable innocent ecstatic laugh


 


Memories flow as raindrops to the surface


Holidays of the recent and far foggy past 


Those who are now no longer with us


Time for them and us swept by fast


 


Teardrops like rain keep on flowing


As blue memories never fully fade


Repeated soft rain keeps on showing


Bitter and sweet water together cascade


 


Strong raindrops die down after some time


Memories of those lost will always stay


Water-colored thoughts vivid in ours mind 


We never forget those who went away


 

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Reviewed by Michael Guy 12/16/2007
It's not easy to write in this style of every other line rhyming endings; and then to say something about loss in such a unique metaphor, relating to falling rain. Push on with that book!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/5/2007
I do love the symbolic undertones to this write, Staci. Rain has been a source of inspiration to me as well; many times. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/5/2007
Memories seem to magnify at Christmas....
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 12/5/2007
You nailed it Staci as I have been strongly thinking of loved ones who won't be joining us in person this wonderful and blessed season but will always be in my heart.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 12/5/2007
We don't forget,,,,so true!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/5/2007
This is so touching and bittersweet for at Christmas we tend to think more often about ones no longer in our lifes and yes we cry more even as we laugh more.


fee
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/5/2007
I love rain, too, but not when there's a risk of flooding. For one thing, I can't swim--and I took swimming lessons three times! I can't even float! I swim like a rock: straight down!

Wonderful write, Staci; Very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/5/2007
Memories of those lost will always stay
We never forget those who went away

How very true, especially around the Holidays.

Reviewed by George Carroll 12/5/2007
Much wealth between the raindrops in this loving poem in memory of those who have gone to their final rest.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 12/5/2007
i love the soft feel to this-just like the rain
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/5/2007
I love the rain, when it's not all at once, as often happens here in Texas. LOL And I love this write. Well penned, Staci.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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