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Rain by Staci Gansky-Wagner Wednesday, December 05, 2007 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
Flowing raindrops create beautiful noise Swirling mist quickly appear all around Between drops hearing a joyous faint voice As the tapping rain hits the welcoming ground Pounding echoes with haunting chaos During its honored life-long cloudy path Whispering those sweet drizzly nothings A memorable innocent ecstatic laugh Memories flow as raindrops to the surface Holidays of the recent and far foggy past Those who are now no longer with us Time for them and us swept by fast Teardrops like rain keep on flowing As blue memories never fully fade Repeated soft rain keeps on showing Bitter and sweet water together cascade Strong raindrops die down after some time Memories of those lost will always stay Water-colored thoughts vivid in ours mind We never forget those who went away

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Reviewed by Michael Guy	12/16/2007

It's not easy to write in this style of every other line rhyming endings; and then to say something about loss in such a unique metaphor, relating to falling rain. Push on with that book!




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	12/5/2007

I do love the symbolic undertones to this write, Staci. Rain has been a source of inspiration to me as well; many times. Thank you. Love and best wishes, Regis




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	12/5/2007

Memories seem to magnify at Christmas....




Reviewed by Rose Rideout	12/5/2007

You nailed it Staci as I have been strongly thinking of loved ones who won't be joining us in person this wonderful and blessed season but will always be in my heart. Newfie Hugs, Rose




Reviewed by Christine Alwin	12/5/2007

We don't forget,,,,so true!




Reviewed by Felix Perry	12/5/2007

This is so touching and bittersweet for at Christmas we tend to think more often about ones no longer in our lifes and yes we cry more even as we laugh more. fee




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	12/5/2007

I love rain, too, but not when there's a risk of flooding. For one thing, I can't swim--and I took swimming lessons three times! I can't even float! I swim like a rock: straight down! Wonderful write, Staci; Very well penned! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	12/5/2007

Memories of those lost will always stay We never forget those who went away How very true, especially around the Holidays.




Reviewed by George Carroll	12/5/2007

Much wealth between the raindrops in this loving poem in memory of those who have gone to their final rest.




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	12/5/2007

i love the soft feel to this-just like the rain




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	12/5/2007

I love the rain, when it's not all at once, as often happens here in Texas. LOL And I love this write. Well penned, Staci. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.