by April Pittman
Thursday, November 11, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I suppose all lovers must mature
as do the tears that they cry
more than just the protestations
of a child railing against the unfair
or crying over what they cannot change
I've become the statuesque fountain
meant to pour grief into a cement pot
but lacking the impetus necessary
to force emotion through my valves
so I'm really just the statue
cracked and dry without its water
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Symbolically and metaphorically very sound and powerfully effective, April. Well done! Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|Excellent thoughts and flow. You have really matured in your expression over the last few years.|