by Amber V Moonstone
Saturday, July 14, 2007
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A memory of a long lost love!
by Amber "V" Moonstone 7/14/07
He entered my soul with full force,
and he knew how deeply it did course.
He played my heart strings too long,
and allowed for darkness too strong.
It was always a battle of dark and light,
and we struggled with all of our might.
I saw his true colors arise,
his deceit was seen through clear eyes.
My mind became very clear,
but my heart just couldn't bear,
to live without him in my life,
or know I would never be his wife.
The turning point came that day,
when he looked at me with delay,
He couldn't look me in my eyes,
no longer did he wear his disguise.
Deception turned an evil trick
into a blessed day to inflict
compassion and release of my pain,
beautifying my inner terrain.
From that day, I have always known,
it was the beginning of how I've grown.
Walking away from unhappiness,
has now brought my blissfulness!
author's notes: I am remembering a long lost love, thank goodness I saw the light!!!!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone
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|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|' Walking away from unhappiness' very nice, romantic, beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Nicely done. As it should be. Lady J|
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|We are all puppets on emotional strings in a perpetual dance> yes were rational, intellectuall and spiritual, but who or what's behind the curtain and whats the motivation, and why is there so many strings and why is this one tight and this one loose. One of these days I shall follow these strings to their very root or branch and perhaps I will find... Misty meadows of mental energy void of anything rational, intillectual or spiritual.
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|In all of our lifes, we've met ups and downs and I've read of so many. Here your path crosses mine for the danger of a mistake takes it's toll. If we're lucky we escape with our sanity, which was the case for me. The lesson for me was to watch each step I take and take nothing for granted. This sounds as if you felt the same afterwards. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ah a long lost love that can linger on with such vividness had to be special indeed and one that memories keep magic.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Your Wiccan beliefs are quite evident - like pastel threads holding together a tobacco pouch. I am curious what light you saw Amber?
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I'm glad you were OPEN to it! Amber "V"
and felt the dark side creeping up!
GREAT write and lesson!
I enjoyed that you shared it~!
GROWTH! ONWARD and UPWARD my spiritual friend~
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|Sometimes love can be blind, thankfully we heal. Enjoyed your wisdom.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Amber, it's better to wise up late that never! Heartache is painful but sometimes we just have to walk away because life can be really messy if we marry someone we know is deceitful and wrong. I enjoyed this...you've captured one here!|