|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You both are excellent...
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|Your dual thoughts complement a journey of discovery that reveals the source of his pensive mood. Beautiful|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Amber & William, a collaboration that interweaves into a powerful poem, bringing images of beauty & reality and a longing to see the face of a daughter you've never seen...touching & sad. A great write!!|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Very nice collaboration.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Amber and William this is so beautiful congratulations on a wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Amber the water, William the stone, the stone fell into the water and they become one...the one that gave this poem ripples which are reaching the far away shores.
Do it again, it works!
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Loved this, great job you two.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|My hat is off to both of you on such a creative masterpiece. Enjoyed this one very much.....
|Reviewed by blue soplain
|a visual feast; stunning collaboration. ...a wee haunting and ethereal mingled together. . .. such beauty, such breaking. ...
|Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
|Beautiful collaboration Amber and William...walking on the beach sets
a great atmosphere where deep thoughts rush in...sad ending, yet a joyous one to see a clear image of a daughter you have never seen...outstanding work of art...Hugs, Peggy
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|It's my pleasure to collaborate with Amber
Who has proven her wonderful talent here at
Thank you Amber, for given me the privilege
To share one of your sacred thoughts placing them
on blank parchments
as we together crossed quills
we scribed with the ink of inspiration.
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|YES! this is quite beautiful and serene Amber (Viv) and William!
Done so sweet in a warm unison of a treat!
WArmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|Just magic. Pure white innocent magic. Left me a little sad but beauty tends to do that!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|What a gorgeous collab, a joy to read Amber and William.|
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Intimate glaring & sharing-With sentiment & a beach---love -Ted|