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Can I Mend A Broken Soul?
by Amber V Moonstone
Monday, September 24, 2007
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Soles can be mended, but can Souls be mended?

"Can I Mend A Broken Soul?"

By Amber "V" Moonstone 9/24/07

My soul is coming undone,
I need some glue to fix it.
Can it be mended?
I am patiently waiting to see.

I was driving to work the other day,
and my sole of my shoe was coming undone.
I thought it to be ironic,
because my soul felt the same way!

I have tried to mend it with others,
they fall short to your love,
when I think I have glued it,
It just comes undone.

The sole of my shoe,
I shall glue that back too.
One day my soul will be
as secure as my repaired glued sole!

author's notes: Just a little poem that uses the same word but spelled differently with different meanings. Don't you just love the English Language!
Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V" Moonstone

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Reviewed by Ed J. 8/5/2012
Interesting concept in this wonderfully playful poem. The heart as the picture shows, can so completely control ones emotions that it appears nothing is left in tact. I believe souls are immortal, one cannot mend what cannot be broken, even though it may feel so. Ones spirit, will, determination or even hope can be compromised, but the strength and light of love that soul projects comes from within. You obviously have a big heart and feel love most strongly, but I don't think they sell a good sole glue.

Stay well and keep writing
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 4/30/2012
Beautifully done...this is more honest and the play on words is priceless.
Reviewed by Steve Ralph 1/31/2012
Lovely poetry, very nice use of words.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 9/25/2007
EVERYTHING takes time, and the more you FOCUS on your Souls/Soles, the longer they will stay mended!
Love this creative use of the words Soul/Sole!

Love and Hugs Amber (Viv)
PEaCe, Love and Wisdom! Love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay POsitive! Happy and STrong!
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/25/2007
I love it and for those that this would be for, yes the soul as well as the sole can be mended with time, smiles and true love. Thanks Amber, great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/24/2007
A very creative piece, using mastery of the English language very well, endjoyed....

Be safe,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/24/2007
Yes. The English language provides opportunities for writers and it's not just with homonyms such as "sole" and "sole." I can identify with the sentiments that you have expressed in this poem, Amber. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Barbara Smith 9/24/2007
Amber, a broken soul is mighty hard to repair sometimes and it may take it a long time to heal after it is broken but in time, a soul does heal. This is a nice writing.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 9/24/2007

Beautiful and unique... "Can I Mend A Broken Soul?" takes one on an esoteric trip on wings of imagination.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Dale Clark 9/24/2007
Ah yes Amber, it says a lot and
that's the beauty of language.
Reviewed by Ann Scarborough 9/24/2007
I love this. Amber I have often wondered if a broken soul/heart could be mended and you are right, time is the glue.
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 9/24/2007
Solely [only] -- a loving soul can help mend a broken soul. And, that loving soul will outlast the sole's glue. Whew!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 9/24/2007
A great metaphor and excellent vehicle for comparison. Well done.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/24/2007
A very soulful write!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/24/2007
yes,, You can fix a sole and a soul too. Best Wishes, Christine
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/24/2007
very clever-and i too love the fun you can create with English!
Reviewed by chris stienstra 9/24/2007
Not only do I love the English language, I love this poem too. It is my hope that the glue you find is waterproof and will last forever. The wonderful thing about a warm, loving and tender soul is that it can be repaired.....
With my very best
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/24/2007
The only way to repair a broken soul is to wrap it with another soul, a carin one that's no broken.
Glue doesn't apply, tenderness does.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/24/2007
Cute and yes love the intricacies of the language.

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 9/24/2007
Very clever use of homophones, Amber! I have a passion for language – well… for languages :0) – and enjoy exploring all of those aspects which make it – them – so rich. The concept, here, is brilliant – soles and souls. Yes… don’t our souls feel like we’ve been walking “on them” for miles… and along paths so rough that they (souls) seem to be literally “falling apart”? Yet… I believe that, contrary to soles – which can be mended almost to perfection by others (who nonetheless need to know their trade so the job will be well done) but can also fall apart beyond redemption – souls can only be mended by ourselves from within. The good thing is that we all have the innate knowledge of this “craft”… and souls have this infinite self-regenerating attribute, that make them… and us… as good as new even after the longest, hardest, most exhausting “walks”. Enjoyed this poem very much!
Reviewed by Ted Bossis 9/24/2007
Evolving towards a sense of beauty is ongoing & a solo venture at times <>Soul has taken in much & Holds much _ Grace*Love*Beauty (Ted)
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 9/24/2007
I love the way you use the example of a shoes sole coming apart. In love it is said that souls cleave together and become one. Thus the word soul mate. You will feel that special vibration.
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