Brave Heart (a collaboration)
by Amber V Moonstone
Wednesday, December 26, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A tale of true love and chivalry!
Amber "V" Moonstone
Gazing at the full moon,
longing to touch your smile,
willing to go that extra mile.
I wander through the meadow
smelling the freshly fallen snow
wishing to see your lover's glow.
Just as I approach the clearing
there is a rushing noise of air
a dark dragon scooping this maiden fair.
I call out your name in fright,
knowing that I will die this night.
and no one will see my deadly plight.
Calmly I call for you, my love
while seeing the earth from above,
I feel a gentle loving shove.
I am falling, falling into thee,
Some how You have rescued me,
from the depths of the darkest night,
Comes your love shining bright,
knowing we are forever bound
thanking the heaven's we are safe and sound.
Feeling your strong, tender embrace,
wiping all harm and fear from my face,
I kiss your ever tender lips,
As we drift into lover's slumber
I willingly smile at my surrender
to the joyous beat of your brave heart!
All it takes is a word
A movement before
A star sparkling
within the depths of your eyes
Lost in the sapphire hues
Of calmed ocean’s blues
a gleam hidden in your
Mona Lisa smile.
To protect the lace linen
You surrender to me
As the trophy
I’ll place near my heart
For you have chosen
My brave heart
As I slay the dragon
That holds you at bay
From me he attempts
To keep you away.
To mount you upon my steed
Embrace your passion
Close to my heart
As to the sunset,
We ride in a steadfast stride
You with your smile
I in shinning armor
Glowing with Pride.
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|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Flows with beauty and love,, Great Job,,, Happy New Year :)
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Amber and William the two of you
Have such passion and write so well
Together especially romance poetry
Outstanding collaboration on this Piece!!
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....for The New Year ....Morning Star
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Amber Than You Once again
For accompaning me in this wonderful write
which you blest with your Romantic wisdom
And creativity, I am truly honored,
by your portioned offering making it One Poem
One thought one creation of love.
Peace & Love Be with You
|Reviewed by jude forese
|exceptional collaborative effort ...|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Beautiful, just beautiful, what else can we say you two are meant to write together, you never disappoint us never. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs to both of you, Rose
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Amber, William, I must say, "You two bring us AD Members some great romantic poetry. You two collaborate so great together and there's excitement and a rush in every line. Great Job!|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|wow...are you two soulmates or just great writers?-whew I think I'll go for a beer as this is a hot poem|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Collaboration of words to express the brevity and depth of this lovely, heartwarming piece.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|This poem is worthy of all the praise you receive. It should be published! Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Beautiful, not you William, but the poems.
You two are great..
Have a Prosperous, Great 2008
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Amber, William, what a great collaboration. There is romance sparkling through each of your pens.
|Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
|This was a great poem! Help keep poetry alive! I would love to collaborate with you guys sometime! This was awsome!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Such a lovely romantic poem like the stories of old,beautifully done by both of you!|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|very lovely-my kind of tale!|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|LOve it! Love It! Love It!
AS they ride away into the sunset!
Warm hugs and Many Blessings to you BOTH amazing together writers! Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
The Medieval time is my FAvorite Time, moreso than Victorian Era! :) So this gleaming treasure went into my heart to savor!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Stunning collaboration, Amber and D'Artagnan, I love these. More, please. :) Hey! I rhymed!! LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|I enjoy these collabs.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|D'Artagnan to the Rescue, and yet another wonderfully romantic collaboration. Love the graphic, too.|