by Amber V Moonstone
Sunday, March 09, 2008
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I was recently at a book signing for Wally Lamb's newest book "I'll Fly Away" which deals with women in prison, here in Connecticut. There is a passage that calls abused women, broken dolls...the inspiration for this poem....
by Amber "V" Moonstone 3/10/08
In the midst of violence
broken dreams, result
from broken promises.
broken windows to the heart
and then there are the broken dolls.
Those broken women
lost within those broken promises,
staring out those broken windows
knowing only broken dreams of love.
evening and morning
those broken promises
became a broken heart.
Slipping into the world
of broken dreams
accepting what it all means
and living as a broken doll.
Is there a glue that can repair
all of those broken promises,
all of those broken dreams
or a word that can repair all
OF THOSE BROKEN DOLLS !!
Author's notes: There is still so much domestic violence in this country..especially against women. I dedicate this poem, to all those broken dolls and send healing waves of love, peace, and light to them,
Amber "V" Moonstone
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|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|'Broken dolls' powerful words that convey this feeling so well. The glue that they need - self esteem and strength to move out and on. No one needs to be a broken doll.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|broken arms, broken legs, bruised broken bodies, with broken hurting hearts! I hear ya'- Most IMPORTANT write Viv!
Speak it LOUD and CLEAR! I'm glad this book is out, I will be looking it up on Amazon, where I get my book! I watch RAW PRIsON Movies/Shows, and this is spoken of!
Write On! HELPING OTHERS! STAY STRONG! and To OPEN their EYeS to their Surmise! AS they TRY to SURVIVE!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|An important and deeply touching write with a powerful voice.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
I am a repaired "Broken Doll",
from broken hand, cheek, leg, cervical injuries, concusions, contusions of all sorts & more inner damage (maybe that is how my back fracture happened) I was at the ER back in 1988 & the Doctor seeing me for a cervical injury (I couldn't talk or swallow) he asked me if I Loved My Duaghters....how odd I thought to myself & nodded. The doc said he didn't believe it because I was on my way to being brought to the hospital in a body bag. WOW & Bam!! I never seen that doc again!!
Women Need To Love The Selves First & Find & Feel Worthy Of The Best!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I agree with you 100%
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Although broken dolls, each has been given a choice. Some unfortunately never come to understand they can be free from their brokeness. And I might ad, there are equally as many broken men in the same boat, swamped by broken dreams and promises that have left them utterly destroyed. Thank you for touching on this very sensitive subject with such compassion. Blessings Amber, Holly|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|You have really described the deep emotional pain lying beneath the trauma of "Broken Dolls". There truly is a lot of violence out there, in there, around there, everywhere we look--yet, we may not always see it because it will be someone's skeleton hidden deeply in their closet. A great write, Amber.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|I've read Wally Lamb's book - eye opening heartbreak! I've written on this subject, myself ("Too Late For Mama" immediately comes to mind) - no woman should ever be abused. EV er. You may have saved lives today - well done, Amber.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|Amber, thank you for taking time to spin your emotions into poetry. Abuse, in any case or form, must be attented to, as you did here.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|gosh,,I pray for each abused doll that they can get the resources to get out,, It is Not tolerable,, and for a child being abused,, I can not even come up with words,,It Pains me so!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|So very sad, Amber, and may all those broken dolls find some mending glue.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|What can be expect in a country that resorts to war to solve a conflict? The mentality are shaped now not to discussed but to apply the jungle's law of the stronger.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|You are so right with this one Amber...
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Most beautiful words!!!!!!!!!! I can't even say which sentence I like more, they are all magnificent!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|important write -|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|That's because woman still are afraid to report it
to THE AUTHORITIES or they think their man will change with his conning promises, and empty promises, after a beating he buys her flowers and begs for forgiveness, until the next beating,
and so on, and so on.
sorry for sounding so cruel, but such is life
The miracle glue to your question is to have the abusers "Arrested"
there is no other remedy.
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Excellent!!!! I could not agree with you more.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|And against men...both, physical and psychological. Men are a silent voice...|