Free Will Reunion
by Amber V Moonstone
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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*Free Will Reunion"
by Amber "V" Moonstone 7/15/08
Your voice echoes in my mind,
Of days I seek to find,
Only sadness remains,
You are so far away,
In my heart you will stay,
Only sadness remains.
Your laughter remains deep within,
it gives me strength to begin,
fading that sadness that lingers.
Secrets shared and kept,
love devotions swept,
away the sadness from my soul.
Why did you leave my heart,
we promised never to part,
when you left, I became sad.
Only a thought of reuniting,
can lift my spirit igniting
Happiness where sadness has lived.
A piece of you is still within my soul,
this distance has taken quite a toll,
but the sadness is slowly leaving.
It has been too long since that day,
when you just walked away,
and now I am beginning to see.
You had to leave me
because you loved me
and that would never have worked.
We are from different cultures,
and different worlds.
You from a married hell,
Me from a free well,
spirits colliding from love.
Oh Spirits reunite,
stop this wicked plight,
and end this separation.
Know I will not intrude,
nor ask for an interlude,
but come to me with your free will.
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Author's Notes: I miss my spirit warrior soul mate!
Peace, love, and light,
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|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|The pain of a soulmate missed
Is like a daggar in the heart
an endless pain
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
I Hope You Reunite With Your Soul Mate!
I Hope Free Will Happens For You Both...
Of Free Will Is Very Important!!
Much Love & Happiness
Embraced ~ Embrassť
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|A very honet request to embrace love with someone
who apparently has much love to give.
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|..it sounds like something special that will never die,,, wheather here or there... well done Amber! heartfelt
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a true reflection of how soul mates feel.
Wonderfully written Amber!...ET
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A piece of you, is still within my soul
Truly the way it will always be for soul mates.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|"...you had to leave me because you loved me..." the author said volumes with just that words, and blessed be those that can recognize love when they see it.
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|Very well written! I can relate to it. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Such passion shared with the soul of another and yet the sadness is so very profound....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Amber, Your poem is very touching, but after the rain comes the wind which will blow away the sadness to leave space for the shining rays.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is a lovely piece.I wish you nothing but happiness.take care
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|By letting go is proving if he returns he really is yours to love, if he doesn't return your love then it wasn't yours to have. Yes it hurts, but true love is out there for each one of us.Thank you for sharing Amber.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Your spirit shines through this open and honest piece.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Free will is the perfection we seek of liberation of mind, body, and soul, Amber...so many live in ties that bind...not condusive to living a free life...may you unbind the mind of your soul mate for a reunion of heart...
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sometimes the old saying if you love somthing set it free is easier said than done. We may set someone free but often they are still captured in our hearts for an eternity.
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Spotless, love it!|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|perhaps it is time for the eyes to be turned in other directions and the heart to heal. a very touching poem.|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|A melancholic write with sadness and pain of loss. Nice write.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Amber...too sad. I'm wishing good things for you. -gene.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Very nice!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|lovely and full of sweet longing|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Your longing clearly evident in these words of sadness - missing him, but willing to let go - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.