I can feel the quiver of anticipation from years ago as I awaited the love of my life and dreams and it took five years but here it is thirty-six years later. Well worth the anticipation.
WOW! What a sadness you portrayed Viv!
HOpe he decides before it's too late!
Follow your heart!
Lovely sad poem!of yearning and wanting to it's lasting depths mentioned and felt!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo
You talk about HOT my girl this truly was but so beautiful and heart touching. Your write had me gripped from the very first verse and I couldn't stop. Felt lost when it was over. Well done my friend, Love, Bonnie
Ah man ~ I'm a "happy ending" kind of girl....you certainly pull the reader in with this one, Amber - leaving us to long for a consummation of love. Nice work!