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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/12/2009 |
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| i really like the rebellious passionate imagery and clarity in this poem, Amber ... |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/12/2009 |
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| A love decree would be a great way to spend ones day or night.. You have beautiful visuals which entice and pull the reader into the poem!....M |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/11/2009 |
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The tone of this poem is so inspiring. Makes me want to get up and jump on the hubby. lol. You link nature and humanity beautifully here. Hugs,
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/10/2009 |
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| WRITTEN WELL WITH PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT PAINT A CLEAR PICTURE OF HAPPINESS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSING. JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/10/2009 |
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Amber, your emthusiasm reaches all boundaries...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
9/10/2009 |
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| Dear Amber, I am late to read this lovely and soft poem. I can see your love and energy are overflowing. Love Emile |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
9/10/2009 |
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| Thank you for the decree sure need one...good write. LadyJ |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
9/10/2009 |
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A lot of positive energy is in this write!!
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/10/2009 |
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| fantastic both your write and the photo!! |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
9/10/2009 |
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Fantastic opening, love the first quatrain. Great write!
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/10/2009 |
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Wow exceptional write indeed that sings with the raw energy of passion, desire and love. Well done Amber...what a beauty.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
9/10/2009 |
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OMG, Amber, we're all in favor of your Love Decree and are in total endorsement of "Alice in Wonderland."
Pay no mind to the many notations below--which I join--reminding us that Freedom always rides with its companion Responsibility. But after you've set the stage with "singles, only" and "no unplanned children" and a few other safeguards, I say let the wild wind blow, if only for a few hours or so.
What a great song of liberation!
Your fellow daydreamer,
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
9/10/2009 |
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| i am all for it, great poem enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
9/10/2009 |
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| I love this joyful liberating poem but in the real world there are always consequences. |
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
9/10/2009 |
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| somebody's in the mood for something...:-) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/10/2009 |
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Amber, this is bursting wih energy and love,,,,full of life indeed!
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/10/2009 |
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Yes, "ride the wild surf" let the wave take us high up and deep down, that the world becomes a whirl of tangled emotions until there is the shadow of only one because we have melt together and are part of the wave that licks the shore before returning to the surf.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/10/2009 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
9/10/2009 |
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ditto..ditto..ditto!!
Love it..am saving this..
Blessings,
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
9/10/2009 |
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| Amber, I agree with Karla...beautifully expressed freedom! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/9/2009 |
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Amber,
SUCH life, such freedom, such beauty in these lines - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/9/2009 |
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| Beautiful thoughts. That would be a wonderful day. |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
9/9/2009 |
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Exhilarating!!!
Sounds like you have alot of fun when you date.
Doug |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
9/9/2009 |
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This is a beautiful poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN |
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