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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Don J - YOU write with Passion, but your honesty is soothing!
Great poem for Sages Challenge!
Not sure what she really wanted from you, in a poem but this was a sure prized winner!
Jolene, is a pretty song too!
So, Jolene could not be tamed! What a shame!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passions, SHEExooo
Stay Safe! and God Bless You and Yours!
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Male or female, lust is nondiscriminate. You write this with such passion, warmth and a hint of regret. Awesome!
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Don Juan, a perfect match to my Jolene posted in my den. I so love your male-to-female version. You should be writing these as song material, especially yesterday's post Other Cowboy's Get the Best Horses - wonderful commercial lyrics. Thanks for reposting Jolene. This is so special to me. I am honored that you took your valuable time and participated in my challenge back then. Stay just the way you are...your quill is passionate and respectful to women and I acknowledge that. Be well always DJ.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Love, love, love this, Don - no man can help himself when he meets Jolene - as he does in this write - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|You've done Dolly Parton (and Sage) proud with this challenge, Don! Superb! "Jolene" is one of my very favorite songs!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D