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| Reviewed by steve Chering |
12/4/2009 |
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Sopme of the scanning is a little off in some sections but, I'm sure it can be tickled up and be made to walk the plank in a perfect way.
Overall..I like it. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
10/12/2009 |
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My..... you are a hungry pirate
feasting upon the secret jewels buried inside womans tresure's chest...
be careful one may very well bury you inside her heart Dearest Jack!
excuse me while I tighten my boot straps....
and harness my ropes...
With the depths of darkness as my shroud of hidden spies:
Sincerely Bound By Incantations,
Poetess Victoria...The Dark Pestilence of Romance
Archaic Mistress of Caliginous Temptations |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/11/2009 |
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Aye, aye, me Captain, a fine write, indeed - well done, Don Juan!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Now who you gonna get to swab the decks? LOL |
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