A Walk On My Beach
by Don Juan Amante
Friday, March 19, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A WALK ON MY BEACH
i took a walk at sunset
on the white sands i often trod
i thought of the beautiful women
i've known and loved.....or
just enjoyed a sensual sunset with
then my thoughts turned to you
i was alone, feeling lonely
for the understanding touch
of a woman as passionate as i
one with an expanding poetic soul
i sat on the sand and watched
the hot sun kiss a smooth horizon
while i remembered your words
and recited silently your poetry
within depths of my restless spirit
i wondered if you were somewhere
walking your beach as i walk mine
were you lonely, wishing for love?
did you think of me or my words?
if you had been here, or i there
kisses would easily seal warm lips
together in breathless wonder
as we whisper poetry without words
through cool excited fingertips
arms enfolding, tongues exploring
kisses deeper than a well of souls
tell me, beautiful one, would you,
if we were on the beach together,
welcome the fire of my passion
and let me touch you deep within?
DJA 3-19-2010
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
3/22/2010 |
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| Such a romantic reverie |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
3/21/2010 |
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| Very well written, Don |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/20/2010 |
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BEAUTIFUL WORDS AND BEAUTIFUL MUSIC AND...A MOST ENJOYABLE, PURE AND SENSUAL WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
3/20/2010 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/19/2010 |
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arms enfolding, tongues exploring
kisses deeper than a well of souls
tell me, beautiful one, would you,
if we were on the beach together,
welcome the fire of my passion
and let me touch you deep within?
Y E S !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DJ You never seem to run out of passionate things to say. This really got to me...I feel as though I know the real you.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
3/19/2010 |
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| Gotta love the passion here. |
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