A Kiss On The Wind
by Don Juan Amante
Wednesday, December 22, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A KISS ON THE WIND
this morning, long before dawn, i held you
while whispering away your nagging fears
and imagining your skin smooth against mine
i held you in the timeless embrace of lovers
and warmly kissed away all your cold pain
you donít know how beautiful you truly are
and to me, that is the vortex of your beauty
that elegant innocence, alive within your soul,
that calls to me with a melodious, gentle voice
until the world is filled with your sweet song
and my heart is filled with yearning for you
too soon dawn will break and you wonít know
the way i tenderly held you , made love to you
in the shadowed grayness of this early morning
you wonít know, unless you read these words
such sorry substitutes for loverís hands and lips
but if you read them, youíll forget to breathe
for a brief moment while the sensual sensation
of my heart brushing soft against yours becomes
more real than the loneliness of a gray morning
and whispers of love drown out voices of hatred
think of me sweet woman, send a kiss on the wind
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|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my..your amazing sweet DJ.....and a wonderful Poet.....your loving heart shines within these lines.....(sighhhh)...please stay safe and well..Hugsss|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your romantic spirit shines in this poem ...|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Another masterful write DJ. I am awed by your talent and skill. Bet she is too. Thanks Dick|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A very romantic write...a genre that can not be outdone in my book.|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
So beautiful and sad, for although your words are beautiful, nothing is as grand as the human touch. I agree with Christine, you are unbelievably talented, and make your words come to life.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You are so gifted at being able to share your sweet words in a private communicate with the reader. This is so incredibly beautiful, and like Amber...tears came.
Blessings and windy kisses, Happy Holidays,
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Somehow, you always know how to get to me. This made me weep..
I am breathless, and I am sending kisses in the wind...wow, amazing poetry and so real to me.
Much peace, love and light, and Happy holidays sweet man,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Warmly kissed away all your cold pain'...'more real than the loneliness of a gray morning'...'send a kiss on the wind'---------- VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Merry Christmas, DON JUAN AMANTE!!!!!!!!!!! MAY GOD BLESS YOU FOR YOUR HEAVENLY TALENT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|