by Don Juan Amante
Friday, June 01, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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seductress, my thoughts of you
are anything but pure, though
they are purely salaciously wild
and often involve a beach or bed
sometimes a kitchen countertop
or some ridiculously public place
totally unacceptable for coupling
like sidewalks or office elevators
places where life moves around us
getting arrested becomes possible
and sex becomes tantric or earthy
dangerous, completely compelling
any place at all really, i imagine
your soft moans and smooth skin
your full lips surrendered to mine
beaches, beds, under street lights
spring gardens bathed in moonlight
where perfume of flowers prevails
we embrace in a dance of seduction
where all your mysteries are mine
and all your veils are dropped away
seductress, my thoughts of you are
driving me insane with primal desire
woman, where will we meet tonight,
on the shore of our mutual dream?
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|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|YOU HAVE ALLOWED YOUR FANTACIES TO FLOW TO THE STRINGS OF THE MUSIC... WITHIN THE SEDUCING REALMS OF MUTUAL DREAMS. WELL DONE, DON JUAN AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by jude forese
|seductive and sensuous ... the poem captures the heart ...|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Such the lover that You are
*Don Juan* with HOT to back
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|How about a store window? Like you said, salaciously seductive. And totally enjoyed.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|this is how to be wild in controlled lines,
you never lose the form, DJ, even when
sensuality spills over into eroticism
and unabashed desire...putting it on the line
in the hottest way
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|seductress? i think you're doing the seducing here....hmmm, thoughts of kitchen countertops....solid glistening smooth granite.....there built to handle HOT.......well, heck, you want them too....
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Seductive, seducing, salacious, sinful, stimulating, stratospheric, symphonic, symbionic, starlight magic, surrendering to all of these words as I read this most delicious poem..wow, you make my head spin, my heart stop and my juices flowing...DJ you naughty man you...love it, missed you...
Much peace love and light,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|The true essence of sensual, mmm|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Sensuously compelling to read. Much enjoyed.