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|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|you better be careful she sounds pretty angry....hands, eyes.....be very gentle......I mean careful.......|
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|how could any woman be angry for too long with someone like you around?! ;) Wonderfully penned, Juan ...|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Your imagery bursts forth like poetic fireworks DJ!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So wise to calm with love
as so cleverly written..
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|How clearly you present the unspoken fury of a woman. I, too, have felt that piercing look. However, I'm usually unable to shower someone with kisses to overcome it. I find that by backing off and being silent, she comes around to loving me again because she can only have that feeling for a brief moment until she realizes that it's her and not me she is angry with.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...and the night is alive with primal sounds..."
ah yes, i remember those...fondly;
a little spanking, eh? never hurt anyone!
seducer and romancer once again, DJ, and
with great knowing
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|AS I READ...I BEGAN TO SMILE. BY THE TIME I FINISHED I LAUGHED OUT LOUD. NOT BECAUSE YOUR WORK IS FUNNY(WELL IN A WAY IT IS)BUT BECAUSE IT IS SO...REAL!!! AH...DON, THE POOR WOMEN THAT ARE TAKEN IN YOUR WEB! DON'T SPANK, BE KIND AND ADMIT YOU WERE WRONG AND THEN ENJOY...WHICH WAS YOUR PLAN ALL ALONG(SMILE). THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Don Juan ~
Vibrant love in passion's palace to calm the fury.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
You know how to melt a woman's fire for sure!! Now spanking ummm, that could be interesting for sure.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY TALENTED!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|