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|Reviewed by Joanna Leone
|Your poem is filled with pain, passion, and anger. Love is a rough sea, a severe ice storm, and sometimes it can feel like thirst in a desert! Great poem! You have captured so many emotions.
Stop into my den when you have a chance. I would love for you to review some of my poems or stories if you have time.
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|A supberb write, where are you going with this one. Dreadful words but from your heart and love can be stormy like this if you don't find the right person and trust in one who betrays you.|