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| Reviewed by Frieda Groffy |
11/18/2009 |
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| I just loved this strong poem! and about older poems- sometimes I catch myself re-reading mine and sometimes I go like (hmmm, did I wrote that?!)- and sit back with a smile- crazy what poetry can do sometimes.... |
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| Reviewed by Sam Tatum |
1/30/2009 |
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| Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse |
11/25/2008 |
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| I didn't expect the birth. I'm seldom surprised but "Shadow Dance" surprised me. I can see how giving birth is the ultimate experience. |
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| Reviewed by Destiny Diadem |
8/13/2008 |
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| Very descriptive. You took me on a journey. We give birth in so many ways. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/10/2008 |
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| A birthing is something to be proud of they say you never will forget the pain. Babies are so grandious little things all dressed in blue or pink. Had so many clothes for my 4 girls I never wore them out. Mother insisted on buying them more all the time. Even had a knit dress from pen pal in England. It was worn lots by my 4 girls and did not wear out. |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
12/4/2007 |
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An older poem that I hope you still like... (sometimes I look at my older poems and rediscover them with pleasure, but there are also those I don't "feel" or like so much anymore).
I find it very interesting, one of its particularities being the physical aspect of love and giving birth. Biological clocks, instincts, emotions, all are expressed together in the form of a choreography, which explains the title. To this effect, your vocabulary is well chosen.
And you show this as having a continuity, being made of cycles, but also of changes and evolution, at least this is the impression I get from the end.
Thanks for a good poem,
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
12/22/2006 |
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Your work on this piece is a well expressed view of this dance from beginning to the ending on this view of two creating another...nice ...
art
sun... |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/10/2004 |
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| "Your dance with creation is in full swing..." Driving the message home - an enjoyable read of a well-written poem! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/7/2004 |
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| Great metaphorically creative write, Gracie. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
1/30/2004 |
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| Ahhhh...now here's a writer that grasps the pleasures and pains of creation. How many times I've made love to the muses in my own mind to bring forth progeny worth reading. Thanks for putting these words in swaddling cloths for us! |
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| Reviewed by R. Dean Ludden |
11/9/2003 |
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| Some punctuation would definitely enhance this otherwise effective piece. |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
10/10/2003 |
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| Nice job. |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
6/27/2003 |
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| This is damn good! Excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
4/19/2003 |
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| Superb ! |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
3/12/2003 |
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Brilliant write! Keep up the good work!
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/7/2003 |
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| Gracie, breathtakingly beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/7/2003 |
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Excellent verse.
Peg |
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