Don't tell me....
by Kitty N Allwood
Saturday, August 11, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Donít tell me you love me and then go to her.
Donít call me your ďkittenĒ and rush to her.
Donít tell me Iím the only one, while sheís waiting for you.
Donít tell me Iím imagining things and need to ďtrustĒ you.
I trusted and loved you with all of my heart.
And yet, this other women pulled you back.
ďOh kitty I loveĒ, ďOh kitty youíre the oneĒ.
But this Kitty was left behind, while you rushed to that scum.
Donít tell me itís my fault.
Donítí tell me you hurt her for me.
My pain and torn heart is caused by you and she.
She has a husband of her own and yet still finds time for you.
Donít tell me you love me again, Iím no longer your fool.
Donít remind me of our years together,
Donít remind me of our history,
Twenty-seven years of loving you,
Only brought me to my knees.
Donít tell me sheís a nice woman.
Donít tell me itís over between you two for me.
Youíre still seeing her and spend time in her bed,
Regardless of her own man.
Donít lie anymore; take her sheís yours to use
Donít think for a moment, my life will end because of you.
Donít think for a second I will forgive and forget
You can never make amends.
So many years have passed.
So many times Iíve taken you back.
I had an unconditional love for you,
I was vulnerable and worshiped you too.
Your every wish was my command.
My heart and life was in your hands.
And yet, youíve ripped my heart to shreds.
And then wanted me back again.
My heart is empty, when it comes to you.
My heart no longer yearns for you.
She can have you, and so can the others.
This Kitty can't be bothered...
Don't tell me, I'll forgive you anything.
That was true at one time.
Don't tell me, you own my heart and soul.
That was true at one time.
This Kitty says goodbye...
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|Reviewed by Carey McWhorter (Reader)
|While reading this, I realize many women have gone through the same thing. You're a very real writer. From what I see, you take the deepest of feelings, pains, joys and create beautiful art from them.
I have enjoyed reading all of your work so far. I'm going onto the short stories next. Carey
|Reviewed by Janet lahey (Reader)
|Very strong, touching and real.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Assertive, honest, and compelling; nicely expressed, Kitty. Many will relate to your words. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Nancy Spartan (Reader)
|That man was not worth your time or love. Your poem shows you were hurt but now are strong and free. I love that.|
|Reviewed by sara prentis
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent work...what a fool he was to think he could walk all over you. Be well.
|Reviewed by Lilian T (Reader)
|Wow, Powerful. He must have been a real jerk. So glad you're writing. Love all of your work. Keep it up!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Such a disillusioned, broken heart. Message is crystal clear, time to stand up for yourself.....