let fall the heaven gate
by
William P Haynes
Tuesday, June 26, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Think I'll find Napolean
wearin' Juliet's mask
Lookin' for Romeo
In a star studded cast
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
Your eyes are tombstones, your lips are grim
Your lookin' for Jesus
But honey, I ain't him
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
It's time to be leavin' the table
Think I'll look for Helen
By followin' the moon
You know she's gone a-wanderin'
For four and nineteen years
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
How cruel the fates that might have been
To play the game and never win
The judge might be holy but his laws are all sin
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
Her loves a vine just wrappin' round my heart
But if I tried to leave her it would tear me all apart
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
And I'll be your lover tonight
And I'll be your lover tonight
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
8/2/2007 |
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How cruel the fates that might have been
I hear ya! Boy do I hear ya!!!
Exceptional work..indeed I'd love to hear the lyrics blessed by an appropriate score..
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
7/31/2007 |
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I love this beautiful shining treasure Will~
GREAt feelings emit graciously from this song!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy! |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
6/28/2007 |
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I enjoyed these lyrics. Your rhythm is strong enough that I almost heard it in my head, but I'm sure your music is different. Perhaps you'll add an mp3. :-)
Thank you, Bill for dropping by my story. It's always good to see a comment from you.
Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/26/2007 |
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Very well done! So light and upbeat, enjoyed this much.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/26/2007 |
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Interesting song!!
Love Tinka |
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