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Don't You Wish
by Lucille van Onselen-Zunckel

Thursday, June 28, 2007
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Don't you wish she was yours,
not only in your dreams
to have and to hold mind,
body and soul.
Not just a picture in a magazine. 

Picture of perfection,
driving you to distraction
Dreaming, dreaming,
don't you wish she was yours?

See her looking from a magazine,
catching her eyes
staring right back at you,
not even a blink,
not even a wink,
don't you wish shw was yours?

See her on the TV,
see her in the movies,
hear her on the radio.
Don't you wish she was yours?
Dreaming, Dreaming!



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Reviewed by Miller Caldwell 7/18/2007
Ummm very thoughtfully written. It reminds me of the girl I met on the Meridian line at Tema in Ghana West Africa in 1974. I had these thoughts then. But now after two daughters and a marriage of 32 years to her, Jocelyn, I must thank you for bringing back the feelings in your poem.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 7/9/2007

unique composition in poetic grand... "Don't You Wish" glows.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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