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by Lucille van Onselen-Zunckel

Monday, July 09, 2007
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A Double Acrostic Poem


Congratulations are due, you won

Everyone gathered on the patio

Laughing, having a goodtime, except for Lauri

Envious of the one that got the pat

Brooding away, her face as white as milk of magnesia

Rumours running rampant about the lover

Attacks of conscience come and go; ebb

Tingles up and down her spine, as she sips her wine

Inebriated, she stumbles down the stairs; feeling ill

Oh dear me, Iím going to be sick, thinks she

Never get involved with a married man:  Itís not chic



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Reviewed by Sue Hess 7/9/2007
i like this. and it certainly is a no where path to take
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 7/9/2007

Outstanding composition... "Celebration" does celebrate and honor the poetic art and the language.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by K. Mulroney 7/9/2007
Wow, how different is this?? I have written only one of these using my own name but I have never seen an actually story written as one. Great content!!! This was very interesting.
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