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Her Mask by Lucille van Onselen-Zunckel Friday, July 13, 2007 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Hiding of emotions
Her mask in place no one to see her face� hiding away her hurt and pain always� keeping her mask in place� never to see her face now� crawling away to hide her pride eyes now turned� as cold as chards of ice keeping her mask in place; no one to see her face

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Reviewed by Erno Kapp (Reader)	1/24/2009

Wear your mask no more my love and do not crawl away Don't want those eyes so cold and I need to see and touch your face




Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU	12/21/2007

"Her Mask" flows and glows greatly. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




Reviewed by Chuck Keller	11/19/2007

Powerfully painful and sad.




Reviewed by Regina Pounds	7/14/2007

Lucille, this is a stark statement...only the pyramid form detracts. You express the isolation and loneliness that accompanies such hurt very well. Gina