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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
1/26/2008 |
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I feel your sadness in these words and it is so heart breaking, for at the end of the tunnel is a bright light that awaits with happinss for all of us.Being a writer means we can be who we chose and do what we want. Thank you or sharing your words.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
12/2/2007 |
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| I sometimes think that poets pay for their creativity with painful, tragic lives.This awesome write touched me, I felt it and so understood it! SC |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
11/26/2007 |
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I agree wholeheartedly with the sentiments expressed thus far. IS sad. Deeply moving and reflective of the misery that few if any humans escape. This universal element raises your creation to a level that is rarely achieved. The talent and discipline that are behind the poem reveal a creator too strong and determined to let
despair win! Ironically enough, the poem is a pleasure to read. Surely, it gave you at least a little pleasure to create it. Isn't it wonderful that we have this kind of outlet?? That we can
c o n n e c t in this way?? Loving Hugs, 'Pea' xOxOx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/10/2007 |
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Most touching read...one that truly moved me!!
Thought I missed this the first time.......musta been explorer acting up on my first visit...and I thought you pulled it from AD!!
Happy I found it again...even thought it really made me sad!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/22/2007 |
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How sad for one to feel so isolated and alone in a world full of plenty. Nicely penned with much emotion....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
10/22/2007 |
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| Very descriptive, very touching, very personal and encapsulating of all that loneliness is. Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Brandon Bashdon |
10/22/2007 |
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| I respond so sadly. Very effective word choices and mood-setting. The grammatical person is not clear, which adds to the feeling. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/22/2007 |
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| Very nice, sad poem!!! I wish YOU happiness every day in YOUR life!!!!!!! Peace and love for your soul!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/22/2007 |
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| This is so painful to read, well penned and very effective. |
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