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Blank Faces...Glazed Over Eyes
by pat medlin

Monday, May 10, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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my thanks to Peter Schlosser for his challenging words written 1st person from the new world order to all of us...have handed out dozens of copies as back-up to the idea that i am only ONE of the 'lunatics' wandering around this planet. thanks Peter...this is a rather trite response to your deep- powerful-on the target words


Are the ones that see
This war against humanity
Yet know not what to do

Fewer still
Are the ones that see and weep
Yet are assured of
The promised Victor

Forewarnings met with
Blank faces
Incredulous eyes
Condesending mutterings

And so it goes...
The march to the slow dirge
Of the masses into enslavement
Of the Illumined One...

The ultimate loser,,,

The promised Victor
Known only by few of the few
That weep
For the unshielded sightless sheep







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Reviewed by pat medlin 5/11/2010
welll patrick...'trite' maybe....but lunatic as we both know is a permanent condition
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/11/2010
so, you are one of us "lunatics," good for you!


Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 5/10/2010
Peter is amazing and I think he would approve. You may wish to to strike "trite" from your vocabulary. Patrick
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/10/2010
Great, meaningful write, Pat. God bless.
Reviewed by Rose Diaz 5/10/2010
Very powerful... it reminds me of a poem on mine entitled "Sheeple."
Reviewed by Richard King 5/10/2010

For a "Lunatic" you sure do write interesting stuff.


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