|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|It just is. Till you get caught. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|dear me, this is a sad little poem, Pat. It's more the story of favourites perhaps. thank you for reading my poem, Waiting Women. Laurel|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You hit the nail on the head. Parents unknowingly teach their children bad habits by praising bad behavior and forgetting the good behavior is ignored.
|Reviewed by Z McClure
|I immediately thought of Psalm 73 when I read your poem. I like the point of view that you used- the voice of a child. Children have such a keen sense of justice and fairness.Enjoyed the imagery.Great poem!
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Ah, the wisdom of a child. Even as adults being naughty is more fun!
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Pat, I fear this has been the lament of many a brother, or sister (and probably lots of mother's & father's) since the dawn of time.
Nicely done, thanks Dick
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|..because it is..
an old friend of mine used to say
'i'm not good, i'm just good at being bad'
Lovely touch here, Pat.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Haha!! Gotta love it. Maybe that's why I've had so much fun in my life, huh? Gotta love it twice. This is just cute.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|A question for the ages...let me know the answer, if you figure it out.