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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/21/2011 |
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| It just is. Till you get caught. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
4/8/2011 |
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| dear me, this is a sad little poem, Pat. It's more the story of favourites perhaps. thank you for reading my poem, Waiting Women. Laurel |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/5/2011 |
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You hit the nail on the head. Parents unknowingly teach their children bad habits by praising bad behavior and forgetting the good behavior is ignored.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
4/2/2011 |
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I immediately thought of Psalm 73 when I read your poem. I like the point of view that you used- the voice of a child. Children have such a keen sense of justice and fairness.Enjoyed the imagery.Great poem!
~Z.B.McClure |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
3/31/2011 |
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Pat,
Ah, the wisdom of a child. Even as adults being naughty is more fun!
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
3/31/2011 |
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Pat, I fear this has been the lament of many a brother, or sister (and probably lots of mother's & father's) since the dawn of time.
Nicely done, thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/28/2011 |
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..because it is..
an old friend of mine used to say
'i'm not good, i'm just good at being bad'
Lovely touch here, Pat.
John |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/28/2011 |
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| Haha!! Gotta love it. Maybe that's why I've had so much fun in my life, huh? Gotta love it twice. This is just cute. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
3/28/2011 |
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A question for the ages...let me know the answer, if you figure it out.
Cheers,
Dan |
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