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a great love poem
by Steve Patterson

Sunday, July 30, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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i was going to write
this really great love poem
about you & i

then i got lost
in the you & i

or maybe
it was the love
part
that took my heart

it would have been
a good poem

but
you & i
and love

well,
this poem
is all of the above

it may not be great
but
the best i can do
well,
all i can do
is say
well anyway

"i love you"


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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/31/2006
You said it well!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Gloria Gay 7/30/2006
A wonderful and original way to say "I love you." Lost in the you and I is a unique metaphor. Well done.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 7/30/2006
Those three little words say it all...e
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