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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/27/2002 |
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| Pretty intense stuff here, Steve. Remember..if you ever need a friend...you know where I am...Hugggs |
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| Reviewed by Tiana |
6/27/2002 |
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Whoa Steve! Stay safe, sweetie!
Tiana ;-p |
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| Reviewed by krissy |
6/27/2002 |
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hey texas,
if you can reach down and grab your parts...and all is intact....it's been a good day.
hugs
irish
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
6/27/2002 |
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yeah, secrets out I was born white (caucasian) went to close to the light and now my ass (and everything else) was burnt
lol.....shit I didn't know whateles to say |
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| Reviewed by D. Enise |
6/27/2002 |
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Pretty disturbing stuff of late! Truthfully, I have no clue what to say here.
Your work here lately describes, (and very well) much of the ugly we all choose to turn our heads away from. Or we cry and then don't know what to do about it all, or look for "something", someone" to blame..And I, don't have answer's either..Not that would/could be heard.
In answer to your question?.. YES.. I have seen those eyes! Empty, Dark..Nothing..I have never seen anything that had scared me like that, before, or after. I knew the guy could have taken the life of his own mother. Without the bat of an eye.
I do so hope, what ever haunts you, comes to light soon.. And if this "is"..what .. "is" haunting..I hope you find your way out soon, and some peace.
~Jen |
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