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Christine Alwin

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Ruthless
by Ken Coleman

The story of a young boy who finds himself in the company of a woman who is hell bent on getting justice for him against the men who raped and murdered his mother...  
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Broken Wing
by Christine Alwin
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Just wanted to be cuddled,
Blinded by a slap,
Broken wing floats beneath clouds,
Lands in tears puddled.

 

 

06-20-08

 

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Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
deep wounds scar
lasting longer than the physical cruelty to love
it stirs deep
sending balms tenderness
Love & Blessings
Vickie
Reviewed by JMS Bell
HOW STRONG...HOW CLEAR...HOW SAD. WRITTEN WELL AND SO ENJOYED. YOUR 'GIFT' HAS BLESSED ME AGAIN. THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Christine~!

Beautiful image; and your poem is simply extraordinary!!


LOve & Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
This is a wistful and deeply emotional write. It says a great deal in just a few words.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
This is deep!
Love heals all wounds!
wonderfully written and felt Christine!
As an angel watches and soothes above, from those clouds!
Stay Positive!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE,LIGHT, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

WRITE ON! I Love this picture! In flight - deep thought...
Reviewed by John Leko
...slapped...finds the touching reality of your words...expressively sad...in words so beautifully written.
very well done Christine...
John
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reminded me of all the children who only just want love even from abusive parents. They still come close and hope everytime that slap will be replaced with a hug. Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Well done Christine, love Holly
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Such sorrow. Liz
Reviewed by Myrtle Poor (Reader)
WOW! Short and sad, but says much. Good job Christine.

Stay Blessed.

Love,
Myrtle
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
Much is said in a few words in this sad poem..Well done Christene!.......M
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Wise expression in "Broken Wing" prods imagination and inspires the learning heart.

In damiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by William Bonilla
A sad write
Well Penned
Love & peace

William
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Oh how simply heartbreaking, yet gracefully said....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Oh my, Christine, this is so poignantly sad but beautiful. I love the way you leave the reader with so much to think about! Very well done!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
a slap reality with written with beauty!

ET
Reviewed by George Carroll
Lot said in those short words. A painful write.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Quite sad, Christine, as are all broken wings.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Beautifully written sadness, Christine.
Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
BiPolar
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Christine,

Hope this isn't your reality - sad one to read this morning!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
A sad write you share with us Christine as we face the truth about life, it can be happy/sad/good or bad but we learn to cope with it in our own way. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Sweet and Sour / Hot and Cold / This 'n That / Zinger of a sad tribute to life and its cold hard facts . . .
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Oh Christine, this one is absolutely lovely,I could feel the sadness of the analogy and reread it several times absorbing the bittersweet sadness of the words. Perfect...
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Tears.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Deeply affecting Christine, can feel the slap emotionally.
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