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Burning Desire
by Christine Alwin
Sunday, June 27, 2010
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Burning Desire

Her black lashes singed,
as her eyes burned with desire,
watching him across the floor,
dancing real slow with another,
she  swept him away from her,
to the lapping waves a ’shore,
bare foot and free, they did jive,
bodies singing in harmony,
moving to the beat of maracas,
his fingers sketched upon her back,

the moon shown her deep dimple,
his smile, stole her breath away,
they were a match, lit ‘neath the heavens,
till abruptly, the music silenced,
and again, her eyes did burn,
as she watched them walk out the door

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by William Bonilla
Outstanding write Christine
Love & Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
Great images ! Its hard to watch a lost love with someone else tho!!!....M
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
What a beautiful visual Christine
How many of us have danced with
Another in our hearts and our mind
...all of us
Love Waltz...sashayazzzzzzzz in
Vickie
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Christine, I felt like that was me in your poem. I stole a hottie on the dance floor my senior prom. His date wanted to beat me up after our passionate dance. This poem is romantic, and heartfelt. Take care my friend. ~Chessly
Reviewed by neerja gandhi
such heart felt romance...loved it .. :) neerja
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Very emotionally felt and wonderfully written to make a heart swell with love and admiration of such a poetic masterpiece...

I love this!!!!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
You take a passing admiration that bit further, Christine, so that it seems that your subject is not just deeply smitten but struck with the sudden conviction that this is "meant to be". These things are very strange and who knows, maybe a premonition of what's a bit further down the road - nothing to feel "guilty" about, just a fore-knowing without any intervention on her part... Well, at least I have tried to put another kind of spin onto this heart-swelling longing! :)) Very well constructed and emotionally acute. xx
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Christine:

This was very romantic!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Awesome! Great fantasy she enjoyed! Great ending! Loved it...

Anna
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Didn't expect that ending.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Don't know about you girls, but we, the "stronger" sex have lived through it all our lives!

Georg

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Desire for one who is with another.
Don't you just loath that when it occurs. Such a weird pain accompanied by guilt.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Christine, this is written so beautifully..and I was was so surprised by your ending.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Ah, desire and unrequited love...the pain and frustration well handled, Christine, in this fine piece of writing.

John
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
ouch! poigtnant write!
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Dear Christine,this is a very nice description of a spontaneous and natural love, Thanks for sharing, Love Emile
Reviewed by JMS Bell
EXCELLENT! 'BURNING DESIRE' RETURNS TO THE 'REALITY' OF....IT'S NEVER GOING TO HAPPEN. A UNIQUE WORK...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by E T Waldron
oh my, you captured the essence of vicarious longing beautifully ...

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
So very sad, sounds a little bit country mood in here. Great write Christine.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Sounds a little too familiar, Angel. Well written.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Desires go unfulfilled many times in life but when it comes your way all will be fulfilled and no more yearning will you know or desire.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
To bad it had to end that way. The piece was well crafted with the surprise ending.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Definately hot on the dance floor but surprize ending....
fee
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Oh, this poem has left me breathless and I do so resonate with it!!!!!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Beautifully done, and the ending speaks for the poem.
Reviewed by D Johnson
Nice pen at work here...surprise ending.

Cheers,
Dan
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