|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Outstanding write Christine
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Great images ! Its hard to watch a lost love with someone else tho!!!....M|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|What a beautiful visual Christine
How many of us have danced with
Another in our hearts and our mind
...all of us
Love Waltz...sashayazzzzzzzz in
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Christine, I felt like that was me in your poem. I stole a hottie on the dance floor my senior prom. His date wanted to beat me up after our passionate dance. This poem is romantic, and heartfelt. Take care my friend. ~Chessly|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|such heart felt romance...loved it .. :) neerja|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very emotionally felt and wonderfully written to make a heart swell with love and admiration of such a poetic masterpiece...
I love this!!!!
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|You take a passing admiration that bit further, Christine, so that it seems that your subject is not just deeply smitten but struck with the sudden conviction that this is "meant to be". These things are very strange and who knows, maybe a premonition of what's a bit further down the road - nothing to feel "guilty" about, just a fore-knowing without any intervention on her part... Well, at least I have tried to put another kind of spin onto this heart-swelling longing! :)) Very well constructed and emotionally acute. xx|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
This was very romantic!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Awesome! Great fantasy she enjoyed! Great ending! Loved it...
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Didn't expect that ending.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Don't know about you girls, but we, the "stronger" sex have lived through it all our lives!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Desire for one who is with another.
Don't you just loath that when it occurs. Such a weird pain accompanied by guilt.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Christine, this is written so beautifully..and I was was so surprised by your ending.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Ah, desire and unrequited love...the pain and frustration well handled, Christine, in this fine piece of writing.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|ouch! poigtnant write!|
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Christine,this is a very nice description of a spontaneous and natural love, Thanks for sharing, Love Emile|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|EXCELLENT! 'BURNING DESIRE' RETURNS TO THE 'REALITY' OF....IT'S NEVER GOING TO HAPPEN. A UNIQUE WORK...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|oh my, you captured the essence of vicarious longing beautifully ...
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|So very sad, sounds a little bit country mood in here. Great write Christine.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Sounds a little too familiar, Angel. Well written.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Desires go unfulfilled many times in life but when it comes your way all will be fulfilled and no more yearning will you know or desire.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|To bad it had to end that way. The piece was well crafted with the surprise ending.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Definately hot on the dance floor but surprize ending....
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Oh, this poem has left me breathless and I do so resonate with it!!!!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Beautifully done, and the ending speaks for the poem.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Nice pen at work here...surprise ending.