|Reviewed by John Domino
|Ouch! No words can describe the loss. When trust is broken the glass cuts so deep it can make on numb. Great poem about a sad situation.
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A most effective and meaningful senryu, Christine. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Something surreal in the transition between one image to the other. I could almost imagine this visually, like a smile painted on his jacket, like a flying floor that hits her face. And then, think of it metaphorically.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Stark and as dramatic as a lightning bolt and clap of thunder. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|BOY! WHAT A GIFT YOU HAVE, CHRISTINE...YOU HAVE DESCRIBED, WITH JUST A FEW WORDS, THE FEELINGS THAT RESULTS FROM AN ACT WHICH TURNS A PERSON'S WORLD...UPSIDE DOWN. WELL DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|ohh..hope its just a poem, very impactful. Neerja|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Such an insane pain.
If I ever date again I'll do a chiastic of you title and wear a top saying, Hit Hard, all the others do.
Rightio, pity party to cease, get up off the floor and get out and dance with abandon with new found freedom! xx
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|So brief, but so dramatic the effect...so very well done.
|Reviewed by Z McClure
|Hard Hit made me feel, in my gut, like I'D been left. The rapid firing of contrasting images worked! Great poem.
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Full Body Amour is required these days.
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Ouch! I could feel this one Christine! Love,~Chessly|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Awesome poetry, Christine; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Aw! Sad but so beautifully written!!! Wonderful poetry, my friend!
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|omg...this is put together
in an awesome way Christine
even though it hurts
Plush Rugs & New Love
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my..I feel every word sweet lady..wonderful writing..Hugssss|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A very hard hit, indeed.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Three perfect lines, Christine.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|doesn't get much more direct than this, to say the most with the least, this one hits right between the eyes!! the metaphors are tremendous!! smile on his back, floor hit my face, awesome.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|you make us feel the impact in this gem!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I can't find the words to say how hard this poem hits home but it does.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Join us now in the Single Formally married club. If you love him you have to give your relationships a chance to work. If you do not care about the relationship DROP IT and think of all the nice people you are now going to meet.
I am rooting for You.
Peace and Love
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Oh my, such powerful words...
(you need to call me)
Peace, love and light
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|The screen door should've hit him in the ass.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|A never ending arsenal, too. Powerfully written, Angel. God bless.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is phenomenal!
Ouch, and this happened to me recently Christine, I hope not to you. Bless you, I think we must be soul mate sisters with all the coincidences...like our names!
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
These few loaded words say it all.
Life has an arsenal of hard hits.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|This poem is swift and hits hard. intense , Morgan|