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Hard Hit
by Christine Alwin
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Hard Hit

He walked out on me,
with my smile on his back,
the floor hit my face

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Reviewed by John Domino
Ouch! No words can describe the loss. When trust is broken the glass cuts so deep it can make on numb. Great poem about a sad situation.

Love and Blessings,

JMD
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
A most effective and meaningful senryu, Christine. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Something surreal in the transition between one image to the other. I could almost imagine this visually, like a smile painted on his jacket, like a flying floor that hits her face. And then, think of it metaphorically.

Axilea
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Stark and as dramatic as a lightning bolt and clap of thunder. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by JMS Bell
BOY! WHAT A GIFT YOU HAVE, CHRISTINE...YOU HAVE DESCRIBED, WITH JUST A FEW WORDS, THE FEELINGS THAT RESULTS FROM AN ACT WHICH TURNS A PERSON'S WORLD...UPSIDE DOWN. WELL DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by neerja gandhi
ohh..hope its just a poem, very impactful. Neerja
Reviewed by Andy Turner
Such an insane pain.
If I ever date again I'll do a chiastic of you title and wear a top saying, Hit Hard, all the others do.

Rightio, pity party to cease, get up off the floor and get out and dance with abandon with new found freedom! xx
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
So brief, but so dramatic the effect...so very well done.
Amor
Reviewed by Z McClure
Hard Hit made me feel, in my gut, like I'D been left. The rapid firing of contrasting images worked! Great poem.
~Z.B.McClure
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Full Body Amour is required these days.

db
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Ouch! I could feel this one Christine! Love,~Chessly
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Awesome poetry, Christine; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by D. Vegas
Christine, Ouch!
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Aw! Sad but so beautifully written!!! Wonderful poetry, my friend!

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
omg...this is put together
in an awesome way Christine
even though it hurts

Plush Rugs & New Love
Vickie
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Oh my..I feel every word sweet lady..wonderful writing..Hugssss
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
A very hard hit, indeed.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Smack!
Three perfect lines, Christine.

John
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
doesn't get much more direct than this, to say the most with the least, this one hits right between the eyes!! the metaphors are tremendous!! smile on his back, floor hit my face, awesome.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
you make us feel the impact in this gem!
Reviewed by Felix Perry
I can't find the words to say how hard this poem hits home but it does.
always
Fee
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Join us now in the Single Formally married club. If you love him you have to give your relationships a chance to work. If you do not care about the relationship DROP IT and think of all the nice people you are now going to meet.
I am rooting for You.
Peace and Love
Tony
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Oh my, such powerful words...

(you need to call me)
Peace, love and light
Amber
Reviewed by George Carroll
Powerful
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
The screen door should've hit him in the ass.

~W~
Reviewed by Paul Berube
A never ending arsenal, too. Powerfully written, Angel. God bless.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
This is phenomenal!
Ouch, and this happened to me recently Christine, I hope not to you. Bless you, I think we must be soul mate sisters with all the coincidences...like our names!
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Wow.
These few loaded words say it all.
Life has an arsenal of hard hits.
Powerful poem!

John
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
This poem is swift and hits hard. intense , Morgan
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