|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|photo and words spin their magic herein, christine.
wonderful work, indeed.
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|well your poem, and the response from Fee below inspired this:
dropped in on sudden
whim to soak in sunshine's warmth,
she rainbowed deeply
Be always well, dear Christine.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|A lot written in so few words. Beautiful Christine.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent combo pic and poem,really brought the message home!|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Such effective imagery perfectly describes this universal feeling. Then the rain stops falling and it's time to stand up, time for a new experience.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|ONLY BECAUSE SHE THINKS...SHE IS. THE RAIN DOES STOP AND THE SUN DOES SHINE...ONCE AGAIN. A WONDERFUL WORK THAT IMAGES THE 'DEPTH' OF EMOTIONAL PAIN PRECISELY. THANKS FOR SHARING, CHRISTINE...I ALWAYS ENJOY...YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Awwwww... there we go... the perfect pick-me-up in the shape of new hope and loving good wishes! :)) Defeat swallowed up by delight... what could be better?! xx Words and picture a perfect match in this one, Christine.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Fee, Love your response!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|small kiss of sunshine
from the lips of someone true
rainbow starts new day
Someone once said "the skies are always darkest just before the dawn"...I think your poem needs a new dawn. If we had of collaborated on this one Chrissie the ku above would have been my wish for you.
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|She may be defeated, but not you. Amazing poetry.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|You certainly captured her essence of sadness!!
* Christine *It has me Praying for a rainbow!!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Succinct but very powerful in meaning and emotions expressed. Thank you, Christine. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
a very happy New Year to you, Christie :)
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Wow, Christine, this is a terrific little poem! Every word reflects the title--Defeated. It tears at the heartstrings.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Amazing poetry and the photo enhances the verses..
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Awesome writing, sweet lady!!!!! You certainly capture the essence of this picture to perfection!!!!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|opps! i hope she has a good sense of humor ... that is unless the circumstance was too much to bear and she collapsed under its dress ... that's a different story and not humorous at all ...|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Truly a deeply moving poem written so heartfelt, as always amazing poetry Laura|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|So real, powerful and overflowing!
The despair we so often feel is brilliantly portrayed here with each essential word. xx
|Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
|Beautiful picture and beautiful poem.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Far too much Defeat these very sad days.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Another brillian Christine Poem...This is absolutely one of your best. I love the way your photo choice (almost looks like it could be you) just nails the meaning of your words.
Missed you here on AD,
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Christine, I just love the way - you say - so much - with so few.
This I can't do
And the picture - so true!!!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|What a moving piece of poetry, Christine, and that picture just says it all, doesn't it? Touching write, very much so.|