|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Sad but beautiful...M|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|THE BEAUTY OF SADNESS. THAT'S WHAT THIS WORK IS ALL ABOUT...AN ACCEPTABLE DEATH IN LIEU OF UNREACHED DREAMS. 'GOLD RIMMED' SADNESS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Oh, how sad! It is beautiful, though, and engages the reader (me) in the drama.
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|...But all the better for the experience...beautiful imagery...I could feel the warmth of the breeze...
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|I love how you ended this, Christine: no regrets. The dreams may fade and strengthen by turn, but to strive to touch them, realise them, live them is surely not to be avoided. This character has powered on through and her heart beats stronger on account of that! A most beautiful parable and analogy. xx|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|this is romantic and sad and so beautifully done! (so good to see your poems) enjoyed! Morgan|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|For some, this kind of dream is difficult to attain without leaving something behind. Love must be very strong to survive and reach out to us in that way and to remain so without regret. Only a beautiful imagination can produce that quality of love.
|Reviewed by David Young
|So deep into the veins of poetry with an Alwin power of poetic presentation.|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Tragedy at it's best.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a passionate poem with an objective perspective ...|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|So much sadness in all it's beauty. Life barely reaches the surface before it slips away. Missed you my friend, Always, Paul.|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Amazing write with beautiful sensations.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Aw! So tragically beautiful...loved your enchanting phrasing, Christine!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|The heart usually knows best.|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Perfectly expressed for regrets turned positive!!!
*Christine* I so identify with this in appreciation
for my own experiences!!!!
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Reaching through the dream yet untouchable
the love. Fabulous writing Christine.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|the tone may be romantic but the reality
beneath your fine words, Christine, bites
with truth. This is splendid work
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|reality is often a cruel place to visit - but upon departing we are wiser, richer for having taken the plunge - this is profound work Christine - I wish you peace and love and dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Christine this poem is so heartfelt and touching as the photo is beautiful, as always truly amazing poetry Laura
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is stunning!!!
So authentic, and the ending, that internal acceptance, is marvelous. This whole poem is very visceral for me.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Oh my gosh...this is simply beautiful!
Those are your words to my poem today, Christine. I used them here because this poem is simply beautiful. Whereas my effort was on a positive note, this one was very sad. I disagree with Felix -- no offense meant -- but sometimes you can have such a dream which is very unreachable, as you have here with the shadow. Very unreachable. Love this.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Dreams are never unreachable to the dreamer. Where there is love there is always a hand to reach for so that you will never sink though from time to time it may feel like you are drowning. You write of dreams and love with a passionate embrace that touches heart and soul. I have no doubt that your vacation not only rejuvenated your body but your creativity and your mind as well. This one at first made me a little sad but I think the shadow...the untoucable dream may fade from time to time but will never completely dissappear as long as you hold it in your heart.
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
all of us one day must face
The hardest part is getting to the "no regrets" stage.