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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
4/25/2012 |
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| Well written, Christine; I'm a big fan of seventeen syllables... |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
4/20/2012 |
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Christine, A loss of anyone, their sunshine is no more and
there is no difference between day a night...Well written!
Always,
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
4/20/2012 |
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| Indeed, at such times it does feel like the tides gone out, forever. But, it always turns. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/18/2012 |
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| ONE GOOD THING ABOUT 'TIDES'...THOUGH THEY TAKE SO MUCH WITH THEM WHEN THEY GO OUT, THEY DO COME BACK. SOMETHING WE CAN ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO IS...CHANGING OF TIDES. WELL DONE, CHRISTINE AND AS ALWAYS, ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/17/2012 |
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| what is pulled out of her, not so easily replenished. to hope for the change and brighter moon!haunting picture. enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/13/2012 |
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| powerfully written and intensely felt! Excellent ku,Christine...ET |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/13/2012 |
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| in life the tide of our affairs is both granter and assessor - blessed be the tide - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
4/12/2012 |
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Life, energy, laughter, light, love... I can imagine everything that is stolen from her and then, I can imagine how it all comes back. Funny how most comments are about the cyclical nature of life. Somehow, your poem implies the positive after the negative.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/12/2012 |
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An insightful reflection ~
Oh yes, suffering, the great equalizer. It is so easy to go numb even when we want to allow ourselves to break open and let the heart feel.
Blessings,
Christine
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/12/2012 |
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Awesome! Beautifully penned, sweet lady!
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
4/11/2012 |
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For every action comes a reaction
*Christine* thanks for wading in
the foam!!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/11/2012 |
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| such an intense state of limbo expressed with just the right amount of surge ... |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
4/11/2012 |
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Skillful writing, but a depressing declaration.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
4/11/2012 |
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Gravity has a way of doing that to you.
Stay true to yourself
The cycle of the sun will bring
A new ray of laughter - someday.
Sooner for your sake - I pray. |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
4/11/2012 |
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Christine,
Yes, yes. the ebb and flow is constant what is gone now will come back.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/11/2012 |
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| So very sad. I hope the tides change once more. |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
4/10/2012 |
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| A touching poetic piece of art. However, the story is not over as the tides will change again. Amen! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/10/2012 |
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and hopefully the tides will return
her laughter and her spirit;
touching and demanding, your
brevity, Christine, hits home
john |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
4/10/2012 |
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Oh those ebbing and flowing tides of life...
very atmospheric piece...
Diana...
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/10/2012 |
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| Beautiful lines albeit with a dark and somber tone |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/10/2012 |
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A deeply touching poem in hope the sun will shine brightly again and laughter returns with a brighter tomorrow Laura
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/10/2012 |
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laughter will return
what has been lost nevermore
sun and moon alive |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/10/2012 |
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Her laughter, sunshine fades in an instantly as the tide
changes happiness within ones heart.
Beautifully penned Christine.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Asa Seeley |
4/10/2012 |
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great imagery. thanks for sharing
asa |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/10/2012 |
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Sounds as though you have lost a loved one...What a beautiful poem to shine over the sadness.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/10/2012 |
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| eerie-sad |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/10/2012 |
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Somehow I can feel this one and synpathize with you for sometimes the things we value most are taken from us...but then again sometimes we push them away. Either way I can definately empathize with your poem.
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