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  1.  Life on Earth

Broken Mirror of Life
by Lyndsey Nelson

Thursday, July 19, 2007
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One I wrote after the hurricane

Look at my face in the mirror,

see I'm smilin'.

Is it just a smear?

See that the mirror is broken,

in five pices on the floor.

Guess bad luck follows the hurricane, forever...

Lift my head to see the room,

that we once shared time in,

the time of work and play.

See the room is shattered,

like my life is shure to be.

Guess bad luck follows the hurricane, forever...

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 8/4/2007
This is another excellent poem, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Reviewed by Richard Orey 7/22/2007
The words in this poetry cry out in the pain of isolation and abandonment, two events of life that engender hopelessness and despair.

Know this, Lyndsey Nelson, there are people right here in Authorsden who understand your pain and are here to help. And right now I want you (and anyone else who shares these troubled feelings) to go to Jean Pike's den and read her lovely poem When it Rains.

And there are many other postings here that are so great for when life seems overwhelming. Lyndsey, focus not on where you have been or where you feel you are now. I leave you these words from my bio page, and they work wonders: "What I focus upon becomes reality. I have the power to choose."

I send you my heart and my prayers,
Reviewed by Mary Coe 7/21/2007
Very well penned. Nice poem.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/19/2007
Sad sentiments, Lyndsey. I sense symbolism in your verses as well. Love and best wishes,

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