This is how magic works.
Centered on the road
between the ponds of desires and dreams,
I stood in the light of
a full wishing moon
and mentally built my intent.
Oblivious to the chill
I stood and focused
as a hushed breeze rippled the water
and I stared
past the night sky
that faded from black to blue
as the light filled my eyes
and the picture became clearer.
I saw him then,
and what we would become to each other.
Clearly, I saw the life we would share.
And beneath that light,
as the surety built
and the winds became more intense,
the ponds began to merge
as dream and desire began to solidify.
It was then that I whispered my intent,
to any Gods
who might be listening -- and the magic worked.
It was the first time.
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|Reviewed by Regis Schilken
|Very beautiful lines. It is amazing how many ways love and attraction play a monumental part in each of our lives.
|Reviewed by Melvin Nzefili
|this depicts more of the perfect time to make a wish that could possibly come through. I say this is somewhat inspirational.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|You've captured the moment very well|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Awesome, I especially loved this line "...between the ponds of desires and dreams"|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|wonderful! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|wow, this is great...your writing is really impressive|