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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
3/22/2009 |
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Clever and on the button! I like the form and the path to truth.
Am looking to read your work more often. - Bill |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
1/6/2009 |
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Excellent poetic lyrics!
I participate prison ministry and drugs alcohol are the number #1 reason for many crimes. Folks say that they think about stealing or hurting someone but could not do it without being in a drunkin state. Many wake up in prison the next day wondering if it was all a dream. The devil does not care - sin is sin and in prison many learn how not to get caught the next time. That's why it's called a revolving door and the devils playground.
Peace be with you,
JMD |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/18/2008 |
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To each his/her own poison... ...points well made, Rebecca. Love and best wishes,
Regis
PS: I think Walt makes a good statement; unfortunately, I never learned how to inhale. |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
11/3/2008 |
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Alcohol is the most noxious drug we have in this country today.
Were not for illegalities...Smoke Pot, I'd say.
~Rebate~
Walt.....lol
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
10/8/2008 |
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| Truths said in smooth flow. Great job. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/27/2008 |
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root of all evil
just an entity to place the blame on
outstanding write Becca
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
9/24/2008 |
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| spirits, as they are often referred to -- can certainly diminish one's spirits if over consumed -- the very epitome of a self-inflicted wound I always say -- you describe the emotions and physical pain quite well -- peace dear lady -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/21/2008 |
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Subtle nuances here that hit home as we ponder the affects and defects of the misuse of the subject...alcohol. Well done Becca.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
9/21/2008 |
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Rebecca,
Alcohol has broken up many homes, I know firsthand. My brother is an alcoholic and has been for many, many years. I haven't seen him in about 10 years or more because of this. I pray for him and all the alcoholics of this world, that they throw the bottle away and turn to Jesus.
Many blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/21/2008 |
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Now alcohol rubbing counts as the same? because I feel all tingling afterward but not thirsty!
Oh yes...I did miss the exit light too!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
9/21/2008 |
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A very good poem.I haven't experience drinking alcohol and never will in my existence,but I know friends and my uncle who drank alcohol.Its not a pretty site and your poem hit the hail right on the button.Take care of yourself
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
9/21/2008 |
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| poignant read |
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