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Castration of the muse (Tanka)
by Rebecca Lerwill

Tuesday, January 06, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Maybe a little cynical - but sometimes that's what publishing a book feels like.

 

creativity
muses mind-set’s broken thoughts
clipped and castrated
as the journey continues
down the publicity road

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Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 1/11/2009
I have just begun also, and it is as you say...Much peace, love and lightness on your publishing journey, we are going to need it!!!
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 1/10/2009
I wish I knew these feelings, I'm too scared to begin Becca!
It's a TRUST-THING! I know it...to start with someone I know only what they tell me! and take my money!
GOOD LUCK! I am sending you POSITIVE and Energetic Energy Your way!
Have FUN with this NEW Endeavor in this Bright and Beautiful NEW YEAR! ( I do hope and will continue to visualize)
Stay Positive! Love the style and depth of this poem!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings of Love, Light and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Stay Positive! Through the peacefulness of serenity....
Reviewed by Debra Purdy Kong 1/8/2009
I can relate to this! Well done, Rebecca.

Debra
Reviewed by Darryn Murphy 1/8/2009
deep i like it
Reviewed by William Bonilla 1/8/2009
huddles are meant to slow one down
not to stop you from reaching one's goals
Love & peace be with you

Eilliam
Reviewed by Jon Willey 1/7/2009
never say die Becca -- tenacity is the most powerful of allies when the cause is just -- may peace, joy, and love be always with you -- JMW
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 1/7/2009
Always one can resort to prostheses :-) sorry, I couldn't help.
Everybody has a few castrated thoughts singing falsetto.

Georg


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 1/6/2009
Completely relatable, know the feeling well....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by jude forese 1/6/2009
true creative effort empowers itself and has no need to be known ...

powerfully developed tanka ...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/6/2009
Great writing, Rebecca; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/6/2009
Your tanka expresses it all very effectively, Rebecca. Many will relate. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/6/2009
God gave me my simple gift of writing easy to read poems. I never could think about being a writer, that is a higher gift from God when you know how to create a story and all the people that you must put words in their mouths and captivate the reader is beyond my simple mind. Purification of a novel is I guess the price one pays when they embark on this journey prior to publication. It certainly can distress the author to see his/her work man handled by some one who did not know what you were thinking when you wrote what he has dismembered. Hang in there.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 1/6/2009
Never give up Rebecca
love,
Ron
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/6/2009
yes I can empahzize with this write so easily, to have an editor slash and cut words, lines and sometimes even whole paragraphs feels like major surgery to a project you pour body and soul into for months sometimes years.

Hang in there though,
hugs
fee
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/6/2009
Keep the faith Becca,! Can only imagine
the frustration of it!...Eileen
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/6/2009
Rebecca, I was afraid to read this as that castration word gets to guys more than it would you...but I fully understand, as far as I've read & talked to others, hope its all worth it in the end...Ed
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines 1/6/2009
Oh noooooooo ... that means there will be no little muses to nurse and nurture into a museless future. How bleak :-)

Neat one, Rebecca!!!

Ted
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/6/2009
Ouch. Pain in these lines - I know. Why is publishing so damn hard?!? It should be this way. Well done, Rebecca.

(((HUGS))) love and prayers, Karla.
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