|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Stain on a carpet, a heady memory....
YOU can write about anything and beautifully you did!
Another wind-swept writing creation!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Inspiration and Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
Love & peace
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i like this--makes one ponder a bit!|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is excellent,I like reading this poem very much,take care
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Reality can be a wake up call can't it. You started this poem soft and dreamy and then bang you hit us with reality, as the poet intended, I am sure. Great delivery!
Much peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|beyond the horizon I want to see
So do I!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|One reads this poem with a shadow of a contentment smile,then...oops! that is a stain on your carpet! ! !
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|our legacy's are often not well understood -- for our perceptions do not always match those of our successors -- interesting white Becca -- may peace and love be your avenue to joy -- JMW|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Makes me thik of the song "some where over the rainbow"...way up high...dreaming..and then reality. Great poem Becca!
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Becca haven't seen much of your poetry lately but this one is sure a triumphant return to the den. It definately makes one think and ponder the inevitabilities of life and living. Very nicely done old friend.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|I'm reminded of the quote, Those that forget history are condemned to repeat it, when I read these lines - powerfully thought provoking and moving, Rebecca! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|I have some wonderful tips on stain removal. They are at www.wallysstainremovaltips.com/
Really liked this one.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
We will leave much behind
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Amazing when we stop to think of it. Superb metaphor Becca,
stains do last,unfortunately...Excellent poem!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|What we leave behind may be hard to clean up.|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|History is finite, but that stains takes an eternity. Enjoyed|