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Stain on a carpet
by Rebecca Lerwill

Saturday, January 17, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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the window offers a view
beyond the horizon I want to see,
where life continues.
trees, birds, clouds – God’s creations
just like me but not for eternity,
foreverness,
for long.
Maybe for a while, until life’s certainty
takes over
and ends.
But the stain on the carpet
remains.
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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 2/19/2009
Stain on a carpet, a heady memory....
YOU can write about anything and beautifully you did!
Another wind-swept writing creation!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Inspiration and Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo
Reviewed by William Bonilla 2/16/2009
Thought provoking
Excellent write
Love & peace

William
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/25/2009
OUtstanding !!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/18/2009
i like this--makes one ponder a bit!
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 1/18/2009
This is excellent,I like reading this poem very much,take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 1/18/2009
Reality can be a wake up call can't it. You started this poem soft and dreamy and then bang you hit us with reality, as the poet intended, I am sure. Great delivery!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/18/2009
beyond the horizon I want to see

So do I!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 1/18/2009
One reads this poem with a shadow of a contentment smile,then...oops! that is a stain on your carpet! ! !
Welcome back!

Georg

Reviewed by Jon Willey 1/17/2009
our legacy's are often not well understood -- for our perceptions do not always match those of our successors -- interesting white Becca -- may peace and love be your avenue to joy -- JMW
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 1/17/2009
Makes me thik of the song "some where over the rainbow"...way up high...dreaming..and then reality. Great poem Becca!
Love and Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/17/2009
Becca haven't seen much of your poetry lately but this one is sure a triumphant return to the den. It definately makes one think and ponder the inevitabilities of life and living. Very nicely done old friend.
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/17/2009
I'm reminded of the quote, Those that forget history are condemned to repeat it, when I read these lines - powerfully thought provoking and moving, Rebecca! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 1/17/2009
I have some wonderful tips on stain removal. They are at www.wallysstainremovaltips.com/

Really liked this one.

Walt
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 1/17/2009
Thought provoking..
We will leave much behind
love
ron
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/17/2009
Amazing when we stop to think of it. Superb metaphor Becca,
stains do last,unfortunately...Excellent poem!
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/17/2009
What we leave behind may be hard to clean up.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 1/17/2009
History is finite, but that stains takes an eternity. Enjoyed



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