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by Rebecca Lerwill
Sunday, February 22, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Unfulfilled life and love
beneath stained sheets.
Utter wants and more
toe-curling ecstasy behind closed doors
of unnamed streets.
Seductive unknowns
are studied and learned
til’ orgasms screamed
and deafen the paining urge
to feel yet redeemed.

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Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/4/2009
a powerfully beautiful write Becca
Loved every line
Love 7 peace be with you

Reviewed by Jon Willey 2/26/2009
"being easy isn't pretty"! -- saw that on a bumper sticker of an automobile driven by an attractive young woman once -- for some reason, I instantly recalled it when I read your poem Becca -- I sense the remorse of a woman of the night -- seeking atonement and the opportunity for her chance at true love -- your verbiage has captured this with great compassion -- much love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/25/2009
Becca, the passion expressed here is palpable and
the lament goes deep! Superb!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 2/24/2009
Excellent and deep poem,very expressive and powerful.take care

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/23/2009
Quite powerful. And LOL at Salty Walt!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 2/23/2009
"...toe curling ecstasy..." never had one of those, but yes, once went half deaf by an orgasmic blood curling, don't remember who of us did that...


Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/22/2009
There is much depth to these verses in this poem that deserves much more than a single reading. Thank you, Becca. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Christine Alwin 2/22/2009
Becca,,,Such emotions expressed in this heartfelt write...excellent!
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 2/22/2009
Boy oh boy, is this one good!! When I worked in the hospital for all those years, it sometimes like the nurses were just passing me around. There were times when I felt so cheap and used.


Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/22/2009
Stunning passion in these yearning lines - wow. Rebecca, I concur, one of your best! My new favorite of yours. DEFINATELY a keeper.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 2/22/2009
Becca, quite intensely written. Your opening verses smacked me right in the face! "Unfulfilled life and love experienced beneath stained sheets",
Wow what a way to begin this amazing poem.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 2/22/2009
there is a lot of depth in these few lines-love it!
Reviewed by Carin Spirit 2/22/2009
Very nice lesson, My favorite line

"Seductive unknowns are studied and learned tilí orgasms screamed"

Thank you for sharing! Be Well, Carin
Reviewed by George Carroll 2/22/2009
Can't say it any better than what Felix has said. Amen.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/22/2009
One of your best touches the cravings and longings of the lonely as fulfillment screams not only to be sated but just to have the human contact of being wanted.

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