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Scissors' Edge
by Rebecca Lerwill

Friday, June 19, 2009
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boldly she snaps
until hardened steel connects.
mangled flesh is not the only wound.
Pain.
There is no way around it --
unavoidable,
so I square up to meet
my destiny and faithfully
stride on.

 

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Reviewed by ellen george 3/11/2010
Becca, this is wonderful, and I fully get it - who hasn't lived and felt this? We must meet our destinies and stride on or crumble into a ball and give up. I choose to keep moving to better things.
Excellent, my friend!
becka aka ellen in atlanta
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 8/29/2009
You have an interesting style that certainly coveys the feeling. I like the first line, boldly she snaps, and the observation, mangled flesh is not the only wound........Jerry
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) 7/9/2009
powerful...I love it! Holly
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/21/2009
wow--there is so much power in this write!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/20/2009
Though you do not post often when you do you offer us such splendid hard hitting visually graphic work that it leaves a lingering impression long after the last word is read. As always...great work.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/20/2009
Ouch! sometimes confronting pain we do without thinking how much it will hurt.

Georg

Reviewed by Stan Grimes 6/19/2009
Great write!
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