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Rebecca Lerwill

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Scissors' Edge
by Rebecca Lerwill
Friday, June 19, 2009
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boldly she snaps
until hardened steel connects.
mangled flesh is not the only wound.
Pain.
There is no way around it --
unavoidable,
so I square up to meet
my destiny and faithfully
stride on.

 



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Reviewed by ellen george
Becca, this is wonderful, and I fully get it - who hasn't lived and felt this? We must meet our destinies and stride on or crumble into a ball and give up. I choose to keep moving to better things.
Excellent, my friend!
becka aka ellen in atlanta
Reviewed by Jerry Engler
You have an interesting style that certainly coveys the feeling. I like the first line, boldly she snaps, and the observation, mangled flesh is not the only wound........Jerry
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
powerful...I love it! Holly
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
wow--there is so much power in this write!
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Though you do not post often when you do you offer us such splendid hard hitting visually graphic work that it leaves a lingering impression long after the last word is read. As always...great work.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Ouch! sometimes confronting pain we do without thinking how much it will hurt.

Georg

Reviewed by Stan Grimes
Great write!
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