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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|I have this same kind of alonelness and it isn't pleasant to try to live with it thinkig everything is o.k. Loneliness gets to you very much at times.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|This is simple, yet complex in its expression of emotion.
I have walked this path... wondering why others don't seem to notice that my world has changed-- fallen apart... Only those who have walked the same path can truly understand. From your poem I know that you have walked those streets too... Well done!
|Reviewed by Z McClure
|Debra, when I read this it made me think of times I've felt alone, and what you have writen haunts me. The imagery is so fresh.
You've incarnated the feeling of alone, and that is quite an achievement in my opinion. Wow!
Please continue to write poetry. You have a way with words!