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| Reviewed by Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
7/29/2003 |
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Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
fiatlex.authorsden.com
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Erratum < < < < < < < < < < < < <
On my review of "Those Sensual Feelings", posted July 13, on the left top I wrote July 31, 2003. PLEASE READ JULY 29, 2003.
I thank You for this beautiful poem,
"Those Sensual Feelings".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
7/29/2003 |
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July 31, 2003
Wonders synchronized by a heart that dictates beauty.
"Those Sensual Feelings", the poem, keeps its flowing all the way to the sea of emotions to flood the reader's imagination.
When "Those Sensual Feelings" were felt poetry incorporated its body.
"Those Sensual Feelings" shows what poetry is made of.
I praise the Author of "Those Sensual Feelings".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/14/2003 |
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Great write
loved the twisted ending
Excellent
William |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
7/14/2003 |
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The ending was not what one expected to hear so you do have a wave of words to entrance :)!
LYF :)Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
7/14/2003 |
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Oh I love skinny-dipping into the sea too. Love this write Jenni!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by J. Murphy |
7/14/2003 |
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| So erotic and yet you weren't sensored--quite a feat. Great fantasy, great write. J. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/14/2003 |
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| this is absolutely beautiful, jenni! well done, sweetie! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
7/14/2003 |
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| Very romantic and sensual. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/14/2003 |
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Very romantic and beautiful Jenni!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Steve Ralph |
7/14/2003 |
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very romantic and very sensual jenni,
I hope you enjoy your swim..lol
steve
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
7/13/2003 |
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| This is outstanding write from you....clap clap clap....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
7/13/2003 |
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Very nice Jenni!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
7/13/2003 |
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| awwww...Nothin' like a little oooolllaaalla |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/13/2003 |
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Very romantic and beautiful, so lovely,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/13/2003 |
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| Dynamic write Jenni, great anticipation;-)! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/13/2003 |
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| Nothing better then skin and water. Great write! |
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