Big Man's Little Man (Adult)
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CJ Heck
Saturday, September 16, 2006
Rated "R" by the Author.
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Big Man's Little Man (Adult)
Little man asleep and warm
cannot come to any harm
where he’s tucked in carefully
between the sheets and I can’t see
yet there are secrets I know well
to wake him up and I can tell
a warm caress, a hand well-placed,
then slowly, faster, have a taste
big man’s little man arouses me
and grows to fill my aching need
no more asleep, he’s rising now
impatience grows to show me how
warm mouth, hot tongue and oh so slow,
yet fast enough because he knows
that big man’s little man, while now alive,
will wait til big man parts my thighs
and like a dance that’s well-rehearsed,
a hunger-driven quench of thirst,
his face now seeks and opens wide
where soon the little man wants to hide
it’s my turn now to moan and sigh,
and tender feelings make me cry
to have him plunge so deep within
that little man melds me into him
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
11/24/2006 |
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Your poetry is a tickler of fancy in us all. Again you open the imagination to erotica's lane.
loveya
Rusty |
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| Reviewed by Brett Moore |
9/18/2006 |
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| Great erotic poem. I like the way it ends. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/17/2006 |
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Passionate and erotic; thank you for sharing, CJ. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/17/2006 |
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Wow
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/17/2006 |
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Now thats called.....yummy stuff....Oh Andy you are always out of line big time!!
But I am sure you got our attention reading this!!
Way to go GIRL...best way to start a nice encouter with both big and small...it has to be a JOL :)!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
9/17/2006 |
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| Hot hot hot, nice work! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/17/2006 |
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You blew my hard.........................drive.
But big man, bigger man:) |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
9/17/2006 |
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A subtle poem that is sensuous and erotic. Loved this, CJ!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/17/2006 |
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Bravo CJ, you have combined erotica with just the right mix of humour to make it both exciting and amusing. Most of us use pet names like these but few would think to use them in a poem of this nature which shows your muse is flexable and imaginative. Well done.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/16/2006 |
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uh oh fire in the den! get the extinguishers!;-)...CJ you are sure to have lots of overheated readers tonight...oo la la;-)
Eileen |
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